Soccer

March 12, 2010
By Jaime Valladares BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
Jaime Valladares BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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My passion forthis sport is
enormous
It is the most played sport around the globe
The crowed of fans screaming is tremendous
As the light of the huge stadium glow
When the ref blows the whistle, the game starts
The player passes the ball to his friend
As the fans clap thier hands; it pumps thier hearts
A player is open and the ball is sent
The player catches the ball in mid-air
As he rockets the ball into the net
All the player's fans get out
of thier chairs
To congradulate him on a close set
Soccer is a sport that is played by heart
That is a good answer in having a good start


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Acosta201 said...
on Apr. 13 2016 at 3:59 pm
AMAZING work dude Soccer is Life

GotSoccer19 said...
on May. 29 2012 at 10:13 pm
GotSoccer19, Dallas, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"A real athlete knows that there's no off-season."

I. Freakin'. Luvv. Soccer.

It's my life. Anyway. You did a nice job with the cheering and how you didn't just use: kick, hit, dribbled... To describe the ball's movement. Good job, bro.


nascar said...
on May. 2 2012 at 8:04 am
I like how you made this poem into a sonnet it helped the way I view it.  I also like the hyperbole of how you said the fans care, and I am more of the pingpong type.

Clean Dave said...
on May. 2 2012 at 7:59 am
Personally I don't like soccer. But the onomatopeia you used, with the sound of the crowd cheering, made me feel like I was there, and each stanza was put together well to show the series of events that took place.

on May. 2 2012 at 7:58 am
Name_Withheld, Pixyland, Wisconsin
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Yayy an actuall sonnet! That was awesome! Also I liked the hyperbole it gave me a better understanding of how you love the sport because I LOVE soccer.

on Nov. 16 2011 at 7:30 am
Terraincognita BRONZE, North Richland Hills, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Through our hold of reality we gain morality.

THHHHHAAAAAAANK YOU!! Your the firs person I have found on here that has writen in sonnet form uner sonnets!!!!!

I really have no clue as to why the others get chosen to be put in the magizen and the ones who actualy write in the correct format don't. doesn't that really urk you?


on Oct. 22 2011 at 4:06 pm
JamesODalaigh BRONZE, Bandon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Ever tried. Ever failed. No matter. Try Again. Fail again. Fail better -Samuel Beckett.
Don't be seduced into thinking that that which does not make a profit is without value -Arthur Miller.

needs some work, but the essence is there.

Mclovin said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 11:00 am
sssss aaaaauuu i dont know man i dont know man..its alright




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