Won't Back Down

March 10, 2010
By tahomiegrl94 BRONZE, Maple Valley, Washington
tahomiegrl94 BRONZE, Maple Valley, Washington
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When the toughest gets tougher,
I keep pulliing through.
When it's life that I suffer,
I think of you, so pure, so true.
Though you bring me pain,
I can never deny,
or even explain,
The joy you bring to my eyes.
So I won't give in
And I won't back down,
Because that beautiful grin,
Would turn to a frown.
You bring me so much joy,
Please, don't leave me you beautiful boy.


The author's comments:
Relationships aren't that easy. And everyone knows that. So instead of fighting like normal people do, I wrote my feelings in a book. My poetry.

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on Mar. 25 2010 at 3:54 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

I love it. It shows how people feel about others that they love.

Can you check out some of my work? I would love to have your comments. :)

Milo! said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 3:23 pm
This is a great poem because it's something we can all relate to at one point or another.

You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.




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