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Shadows surround me in this darkened room.
I've been waiting here forever. It seems,
Waiting for you to save me from this gloom.
In this room I am surrounded by screams.
They told me to look at the black ink lines,
They wanted me to tell them what I saw.
There are chills runnning all along my spine
as the lines repeat along these four walls.
The shadows here have very cold fingers.
Their long nails dig into my pale white skin.
The darkness of night, in stillness, lingers.
I feel cold hatred for you, my love, within.
You left me here, you sent me away.
"I'm not insane." Was all I got to say.



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lovestruck said...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 1:01 pm
i like this alot its very descriptive. it shows alot of visual and emotional features. i like this peice cause its unique and unlike anything ive heard.
 
Ebony_Rose said...
Dec. 8, 2010 at 2:42 pm
It was originally had instead of got but my teacher changed it... lol
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 7, 2010 at 8:57 pm
you're the best. I lov this one. its easy to understand whats going and I think anyone who's ever been in a mental institution could relate to it. very nice.
 
Ebony_Rose replied...
May 12, 2010 at 8:01 am
Thank you. I wish my teacher would have kept making writing assignments. We moved on to grammar. :(
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 12, 2010 at 8:25 am
thats cause nobody can spell-but you should keep doing your dance-i love this stuff.
 
Ebony_Rose replied...
May 17, 2010 at 8:02 am
Lol... Thanks again... :)
 
HeronHero said...
May 5, 2010 at 1:12 pm
I love this one! It is very discriptive yet you keep it pretty short and full of emotion!!!The only thing i don't like is when you use got in the end...sorry i'm so critical! I'm only trying to help, I promise.:) You may want to use have or had in the future, really anything but got.... everything else was really great though, except that one little thing!:/  
 
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