Spark Of Insanity

March 2, 2010
By Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
21 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The simplest way that i can understand therapy is that we're born a certain
way, we're taught to be something different, and we spend our whole lives
trying to unravel it and ultimately align ourselves with who we really are." ~Billy Corgan


Shadows surround me in this darkened room.
I've been waiting here forever. It seems,
Waiting for you to save me from this gloom.
In this room I am surrounded by screams.
They told me to look at the black ink lines,
They wanted me to tell them what I saw.
There are chills runnning all along my spine
as the lines repeat along these four walls.
The shadows here have very cold fingers.
Their long nails dig into my pale white skin.
The darkness of night, in stillness, lingers.
I feel cold hatred for you, my love, within.
You left me here, you sent me away.
"I'm not insane." Was all I got to say.


The author's comments:
This is my Shakspearian sonnet for my English class. :)

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on Sep. 21 2011 at 1:01 pm
darkened-love-writer PLATINUM, Morgantown, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"WHY WASTE UR TIME TRYIN TO FIT IN WHEN U WERE MADE TO STAND OUT!!!"

i like this alot its very descriptive. it shows alot of visual and emotional features. i like this peice cause its unique and unlike anything ive heard.

on Dec. 8 2010 at 2:42 pm
Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
21 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The simplest way that i can understand therapy is that we're born a certain
way, we're taught to be something different, and we spend our whole lives
trying to unravel it and ultimately align ourselves with who we really are." ~Billy Corgan

It was originally had instead of got but my teacher changed it... lol

on May. 17 2010 at 8:02 am
Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
21 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The simplest way that i can understand therapy is that we're born a certain
way, we're taught to be something different, and we spend our whole lives
trying to unravel it and ultimately align ourselves with who we really are." ~Billy Corgan

Lol... Thanks again... :)

on May. 12 2010 at 8:25 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thats cause nobody can spell-but you should keep doing your dance-i love this stuff.

on May. 12 2010 at 8:01 am
Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
21 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The simplest way that i can understand therapy is that we're born a certain
way, we're taught to be something different, and we spend our whole lives
trying to unravel it and ultimately align ourselves with who we really are." ~Billy Corgan

Thank you. I wish my teacher would have kept making writing assignments. We moved on to grammar. :(

on May. 7 2010 at 8:57 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you're the best. I lov this one. its easy to understand whats going and I think anyone who's ever been in a mental institution could relate to it. very nice.

on May. 5 2010 at 1:12 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

I love this one! It is very discriptive yet you keep it pretty short and full of emotion!!!The only thing i don't like is when you use got in the end...sorry i'm so critical! I'm only trying to help, I promise.:) You may want to use have or had in the future, really anything but got.... everything else was really great though, except that one little thing!:/  


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