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Mirror Immages

February 24, 2010
By Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)


To others his skin is like soft petals
His face others think has a pretty lovely shape
But, to me his skin feels like fields of nettles
To me he looks like a babbling ape
My mom thinks he is reformed, no disgrace
My dad thinks he is so extremely nice
To me I just want to spray him with mace
I think his voice sounds like a hoard of mice
My brother loves him to come and play
To my sisters his hair is so silky
I myself couldn’t stand him for a day
To me his hair is like spoiled milky
From my grandparents view he seems to float
It seems to me his feet are like a boat.

So you see our views are very different.
We don’t see quite eye to eye.
From worsement to pleasant.
We can’t make our minds as an ally.
You see good I see bad.
In different ways a different youth
We all think the lesser is to be had.
Neither can exist as truth.
But each is a mirror image of the other.
So here is where I end my useless blander.


The author's comments:
I wrote this in a English class an Recently added to it.

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on Mar. 9 2010 at 7:59 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

I did intend for it to amuse others,I'm glad I succeed in that. I'll try to check out your works soon. Thankers!

Milo! said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 3:39 pm
Haha. I really did find this peice funny, even if that wasn't your intention. I really love it, and it brightened up my day.

You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.