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February 13, 2010
By SuzieSnapp BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
SuzieSnapp BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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All these years I’ve lived in darkness,
A vast emptiness inside me,
A cold icy heart, never beating, never beating.

Then one magical night, many moons ago,
As I was drowning in the storm, you wrapped your arms around me tight,
Saving me from the dark and evil night, you carried me into the beautiful morn’

You swore your very name on mine,
Taking my hand into your own,
You said that we’d run out of time,
You left me here-all alone.

Times have changed, and so have we.
But if there is one thing I’ll forever be sure of,
It’s that I’ll always love you,
And you…you’ll always love me.


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dedicated to cdb.

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on Apr. 7 2010 at 1:20 pm
SuzieSnapp BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Thank you so much! that means so much to me! Btw, I do love your writing as well, you have a very special way with words.

Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 11:14 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.