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My heart melted in the snow
My tears got lost
In the abyss of winter’s glow

I left you in the white fields
I left you in the holly
You took away my warmth
And covered up the jolly

Grab your coat and take this season
Accept my sorrow, and seize my reason
Bundle up now and carry on
I’m dancing by myself
Into spring’s sweet dawn



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xLpoet said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 4:28 pm:
The expression of this poem is original and it is very steady. I wanted to read it over and over again. Gorgeous work. Please rate mine.:) I'd also love some pointers.
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 12:55 pm:
first off, let me just say that i love the title; very appropriate for the content of the poem :) this is just a great piece. i like all the feelings and heartbreak emotions put into this. i love the line "grab your coat and take this season. accept my sorrow, and seize the reason." it's brilliant! :) great job overall!! if you wouldn't mind, could you check out some of my work? :)
 
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