Broken Heartbeats

February 7, 2010
Unsheltered my passion is breaking free
Keeping the rhythm of perfect chaos
The frantic beating a desperate plea
The time in my heart forever embossed

My soul won’t heal, split by eternity
Dwelling in the heartbreak, I need to take
A state of unrivaled modernity
Twist it to my form, my spirit it wakes

Tethered so long to a creature of hate
I wade through a tangled, sinister web
A force begotten through methods irate
Fury strikes, but the tide of rage will ebb

Anger unworthy of notice still lives
Victims of love, despite hurt, still forgive.

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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 8:58 pm

I like this... and yes, the emotions are quite raw, which is one of the things that I like. Really good work, not everyone can take emotions from their minds and put it accurately onto paper, you did, so congrats!

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Milo! said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 11:18 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
lilyraven replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 11:31 pm
Hello! Thanks for the comment. =) I will try to find time to check out some of your stuff soon!
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