Highschool

Who does not try to fit into a clique
Posers try to be cool and better than you
There are all kinds of groups just take your pick
Every single person will have to pick too
Actors say they stand apart from the crowd
Yet they form a pack and reject the rest
They are all the same judgemental and proud
No wonder so many of them feel depressed
School is an emotional battlefield
A constant war with the world and yourself
You are bound to lose with lies as your shield
See past how people look and their wealth
Do not forget the most important part
Be true to yourself and follow your heart





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Alon_Freevoice said...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 9:40 pm
This is a good sonnet and this really tells about highschool and the people in it.

Keep writing... :)
I love your other sonnet, Dream of the Insane, too. :D
 
Supernova7 replied...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 11:55 am
Thank you!:)
 
SamiLynn said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 11:41 pm
im very impressed that you have a consistent rhyme and rhythm without losing the meaning!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Oct. 24, 2010 at 5:34 pm
Thank you:)
 
Amiee said...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 1:54 am

wow, i think this is excatly wat highschool is like

it's so cool how you made it into a poem AND made it ryhme!

 
Supernova7 replied...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 10:42 am
haha thank you:)
 
Supernova7 said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 2:46 pm
thank you everyone for commenting and/or rating:)
 
Zavery_ replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 12:43 pm
Great poem! It's so emotional and has a good message. Five stars!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 7:37 pm
Thanx:)                      
 
riley... said...
Jul. 9, 2010 at 2:08 am
wow. nice job :)... its so true... the anticonformist message here is priceless
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 7:49 am
Wow, so true and very well written!! great job-you stated this very very well!! please check out some of my work!! i love comments!!
 
FlyWithMe_899 said...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 8:29 pm
veryy true. good jobb!!
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 8:32 pm
Thank you:)
 
JoetheBlanc said...
May 25, 2010 at 10:11 am
amazing. prolific. i find nothing wrong with this. the truth typed here is vivid.
 
Authorgal98 replied...
Jun. 5, 2010 at 1:22 pm
Oh. My. Gosh. Yuo just took my thoughts and laced them together in an absolutely perfect way. So true, so true.
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 9:43 am
Thank you both:)
 
JacobC said...
May 21, 2010 at 6:29 am
I agree, even though I'm still in 8th grade.
 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 8:25 pm
Thank you Jacob:)
 
Milo! said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 11:20 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
Supernova7 replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 1:02 am
Thanx:) of course i will
 
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