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Highschool

January 31, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


Who does not try to fit into a clique
Posers try to be cool and better than you
There are all kinds of groups just take your pick
Every single person will have to pick too
Actors say they stand apart from the crowd
Yet they form a pack and reject the rest
They are all the same judgemental and proud
No wonder so many of them feel depressed
School is an emotional battlefield
A constant war with the world and yourself
You are bound to lose with lies as your shield
See past how people look and their wealth
Do not forget the most important part
Be true to yourself and follow your heart



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on Sep. 2 2011 at 11:55 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you!:)

on Jun. 23 2011 at 9:40 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

This is a good sonnet and this really tells about highschool and the people in it.

Keep writing... :)
I love your other sonnet, Dream of the Insane, too. :D

on Oct. 24 2010 at 5:34 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)

on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:41 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
20 articles 9 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The unexamined life is not worth living." ~Socrates

im very impressed that you have a consistent rhyme and rhythm without losing the meaning!

on Sep. 4 2010 at 10:42 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

haha thank you:)

Amiee said...
on Sep. 4 2010 at 1:54 am

wow, i think this is excatly wat highschool is like

it's so cool how you made it into a poem AND made it ryhme!


on Aug. 13 2010 at 7:37 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanx:)                      

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 12:43 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Great poem! It's so emotional and has a good message. Five stars!

on Jul. 17 2010 at 2:46 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thank you everyone for commenting and/or rating:)

riley... GOLD said...
on Jul. 9 2010 at 2:08 am
riley... GOLD, Yakima, Washington
13 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity." edgar allen poe.

wow. nice job :)... its so true... the anticonformist message here is priceless

on Jul. 3 2010 at 7:49 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow, so true and very well written!! great job-you stated this very very well!! please check out some of my work!! i love comments!!

on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:32 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)

on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:29 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

veryy true. good jobb!!

on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:25 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you Jacob:)

on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:43 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you both:)

on Jun. 5 2010 at 1:22 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

Oh. My. Gosh. Yuo just took my thoughts and laced them together in an absolutely perfect way. So true, so true.

on May. 25 2010 at 10:11 am
JoetheBlanc GOLD, Roswell, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the shadow proves the sunshine!"

amazing. prolific. i find nothing wrong with this. the truth typed here is vivid.

JacobC GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 6:29 am
JacobC GOLD, Belgium, Wisconsin
10 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Am I indecisive? Well, yes and no." -Anonymous

I agree, even though I'm still in 8th grade.

on Apr. 30 2010 at 1:02 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanx:) of course i will

Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 11:20 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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