Sleeping Beauty

January 29, 2010
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She stumbled into sleep
while giving out a yawn.
Her sleep was sweet and deep,
It lasted way past dawn.

It lasted way past dawn,
past lunch and afternoon
her face as white as swan,
she gave way to the tune.

And than the harp fell still,
the bass, the violin,
perhaps she's had her fill
of possessive bones and skin





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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 7:56 am
Wow this is really good-great job i love the rhyme and rhythm, its very relaxed and soothing!! awesome job and i would love it if you would check out some of my work when you get the chance!! i love comments!!:)
 
Milo! said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 11:21 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
Zoerosss replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 4:34 pm
Thank you for the encouragement, it means the world to me since I'm going through a bit of a rough time, so thank you
 
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