I Love You

January 28, 2010
By Elizabeth-Martin PLATINUM, Georgetown, Massachusetts
Elizabeth-Martin PLATINUM, Georgetown, Massachusetts
21 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives me a reason to cry, I'll show life that I have 1000 reasons to smile.


I love you, baby. More than the rain.
More than the stars. I just can't explain.
My love for you, it's honest and true.
I wish I could share a kiss with you.

I wish to sit and guide your hands,
across piano keys, so you understand.
That like piano, where you play from your heart,
you need to know the keys before you start.

You could give me hug and a lasting kiss.
I know I've never felt anything like this.
We could go for a walk, with our hands together.
Do you really think this could last forever?

You have your own words, that I've never heard.
But unique is what I've always preferred.
The words of my music, to you they relate.
And I think our bond was decided by fate.

I miss you now, and I'll miss you tomorrow.
And my heart is to keep and not to borrow.
A letter for you, if I sent one out to sea,
Would say "You and I were meant to be."

Because when you say "I love you" it means the world to me.


The author's comments:
When you love someone, tell them how much. At least try, because love can't be said in words, but you can make an effort. Which is what I've done here.

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on May. 19 2010 at 6:15 pm
talia_is_happy GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who mind- don't matter, and the people who matter- don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

I know exactly what you mean! I can really connect to this poem because I nkow how it feels.

on May. 18 2010 at 3:48 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

OMG! I love it! Can I give you more than 5 stars? I wish I could..... I would love it if you would check out some of my work. That would be amazing if you did that for me. :) Keep writing!

on May. 18 2010 at 10:00 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

your work blows me away. yet another incredible piece :) bravo. i wish i could give you more than 5 stars! :)

on Mar. 22 2010 at 5:57 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

I really love the bit about the piano. It's a wonderful poem, what with the way it flows & and the melody by which it goes. :)

shortyy101 said...
on Feb. 12 2010 at 1:27 pm
this is so great ! i love it.. it relates to how i feel bout my bf... great job && keep on writing


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