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I Love You

I love you, baby. More than the rain.
More than the stars. I just can't explain.
My love for you, it's honest and true.
I wish I could share a kiss with you.

I wish to sit and guide your hands,
across piano keys, so you understand.
That like piano, where you play from your heart,
you need to know the keys before you start.

You could give me hug and a lasting kiss.
I know I've never felt anything like this.
We could go for a walk, with our hands together.
Do you really think this could last forever?

You have your own words, that I've never heard.
But unique is what I've always preferred.
The words of my music, to you they relate.
And I think our bond was decided by fate.

I miss you now, and I'll miss you tomorrow.
And my heart is to keep and not to borrow.
A letter for you, if I sent one out to sea,
Would say "You and I were meant to be."

Because when you say "I love you" it means the world to me.



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talia_is_happy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2010 at 6:15 pm:
I know exactly what you mean! I can really connect to this poem because I nkow how it feels.
 
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VampiericRain said...
May 18, 2010 at 3:48 pm:
OMG! I love it! Can I give you more than 5 stars? I wish I could..... I would love it if you would check out some of my work. That would be amazing if you did that for me. :) Keep writing!
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 18, 2010 at 10:00 am:
your work blows me away. yet another incredible piece :) bravo. i wish i could give you more than 5 stars! :)
 
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annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 5:57 am:
I really love the bit about the piano. It's a wonderful poem, what with the way it flows & and the melody by which it goes. :)
 
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shortyy101 said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 1:27 pm:
this is so great ! i love it.. it relates to how i feel bout my bf... great job && keep on writing
 
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