"Unrequited Universe"

January 3, 2010
By DisenchantedDancer111 SILVER, Deville, Louisiana
DisenchantedDancer111 SILVER, Deville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"It is captivating the way the stars still shine... Even when they are surrounded by overwhelming darkness"

Silently I wonder how the stars shine
Like volatile reflections of the past
Memories tease this broken heart of mine
Yet a meteor’s light shall never last.
So the night steals my hopes, wishes, and dreams
And the remnants of love are lost in space…
I listen for the echo of my screams
As I wait for the sun to show its face
…But it doesn’t return nor does it care
Hidden forever behind Saturn’s sufferings.
Gravity imprisons all in its lair,
Oblivious of the pain that it brings…
Worlds shatter still you don’t hear me
And sadly i love Thee-wholeheartedly.

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on Jun. 15 2010 at 1:42 pm
brittanyelsie GOLD, Highland, Indiana
10 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Around here, however, we don’t look backwards for very long. We keep moving forward, opening up new doors and doing new things… and curiosity keeps leading us down new paths.”
–Walt Disney

This is amazing; beautifully written, definitely relatable, and... I just love it!


Keep writing!

Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 12:48 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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