I Love You

November 26, 2009
By RoanneL SILVER, Comox, Other
RoanneL SILVER, Comox, Other
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Three words, always spoken
But what do they mean?
Is it deep feelings awoken,
Or emotions unseen?

Do they explain the gut wrenching feeling
You get when you see him,
Or an electric fire that sends the other reeling?
Making your soul no longer dim

Are those words immature,
Yet filled with passion?
If you say them and you are unsure,
You’ll just be another part of the latest fashion

So always be true
When you tell someone “I love you…”

The author's comments:
I wanted this sonnet to show the meanings behind telling some one you love them and the reasons you might say so. I wanted the reader to create their own images about love, and passion. I felt that this poem could show that kids use the term “I love you” in a very loose way, not realizing the true meaning of why some one says they love someone.

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on Jun. 30 2010 at 10:03 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww, nice poem^^ nice meaning. and the words wer very meaningful too. good jobb!

on Dec. 16 2009 at 5:31 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

I love this poem! It's very clever and witty. (Is that how you spell it?) Very original. You should check out my poem too! >.<


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