Earths Universe

November 16, 2009
By Edgar Torres BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
Edgar Torres BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
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Moon blew ocean waves
The stars shine inside the water
Dolphins jump through sea

On earth looking stars
White shining stars
Stars see reflections

The author's comments:
What inspired me to write one of my haikus,was to imagine what's it like to love someone.important.It's also a time when I look at the stars and remember a happy moment.It also reminds me when I told someone or he/she told me,"Don't give up on whatever you do".It also inspires me because I remember everything that happened in my life and still is.

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on Feb. 24 2010 at 4:41 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

very great imagery.ive written a ton of haikus myself. check out a few and let me kno wat yah think. love it!!! much appriciated.

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