I Will Be Happy

November 8, 2009
Can’t You Tell My Pain
How my Tears Glisten
Like The shallow puddles of rain
Because No One is willing to listen
I have so much to say
But no one can here
My Cries Day after Day
How At night I fear
I will Find No Other Way
To get My mind Clear
The Quiet Surrounds Me
As I sit and Listen
To the voices in my head
Telling me what is missing
There is a Hole In My heart
And it keeps getting bigger
I can’t explain
I just don’t know how to start
This is something that takes time to figure
Let me say it
Let Me Speak
I want these tears To Stop
Sliding Down My soft Cheek
I miss My Past
The Memories I had

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ForeverYoung90210 said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 5:28 pm
This sounds like something I've written before. I know what you mean by a love preserved in the past. And the way you refer to it in a deep, yet vague manner... I can relate to the last sentence! Keep on writing .
EricForman said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:44 pm
Very emotional, I hope whatever you are going through gets better.
Duckie430 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 12:20 pm
this is really good.. wow, alot of emotion, it's just really good...
rundontwalk. said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 5:39 am

this is beautiful. really, truly beautiful.

it would be so awesome if you could look at some of my stuff even though they're nothing compared to this :)

iWriteToExpressThouqhts said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 1:53 pm
omg I love this . every line every word . . simply powerful . amazing job . please check and rate my work ? :)
i.ll_be_fine_899 said...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 1:28 pm
thats cool how this came straight from ur heart :) theres real meaning. good job ^^
ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 3:42 pm

That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u

Swiwi17 said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 2:33 pm
This is simply amazing
Cancion_de_hielo_y_fuego said...
May 14, 2010 at 9:08 am
I really like how heartfelt this was: it really laid bare your emotions. Great job.
xxkelvin28xx said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 9:46 pm
i love it really good you know who this is =D
Glenn W. said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 6:28 am
This poem definitely has something a million other poems don't. It has feeling. The other poems that have been revised a thousand times and checked for spelling and edited for grammar and were created so mechanically don't have the emotion that this does. I hope you continue to write, and use writing as an emotional vent. Your writing is good.
meemee said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 12:17 pm
i loveed thiss !!
everyone should rate this five stars !
ii really hope it gets published (:
Claudia-Amador234 said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 4:30 pm
This really good congrats
Cooldudee3732 replied...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 12:19 pm
dude, you should totallly teelll all your friends to rate this..its truly amazinq ! i hope it gets published yo, this is realll good stuf almost made me shed a tear loll.
crazykim said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 10:38 pm
My favorite. Thanks so much for sharing this, you truly are so so talented.
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