I Will Be Happy

November 8, 2009
By WriiteO2iinspiire SILVER, Little Falls, New Jersey
WriiteO2iinspiire SILVER, Little Falls, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
A real woman isn't perfect, and a perfect woman isn't real.


Can’t You Tell My Pain
How my Tears Glisten
Like The shallow puddles of rain
Because No One is willing to listen
I have so much to say
But no one can here
My Cries Day after Day
How At night I fear
I will Find No Other Way
To get My mind Clear
The Quiet Surrounds Me
As I sit and Listen
To the voices in my head
Telling me what is missing
There is a Hole In My heart
And it keeps getting bigger
I can’t explain
I just don’t know how to start
This is something that takes time to figure
Let me say it
Let Me Speak
I want these tears To Stop
Sliding Down My soft Cheek
I miss My Past
The Memories I had


The author's comments:
This Just came Out, I was inspired and all I did was let my heart do the typing.

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on Nov. 30 2011 at 5:28 pm
ForeverYoung90210 BRONZE, Walton, Nebraska
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This sounds like something I've written before. I know what you mean by a love preserved in the past. And the way you refer to it in a deep, yet vague manner... I can relate to the last sentence! Keep on writing .

EricForman said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:44 pm
EricForman, Texas
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Very emotional, I hope whatever you are going through gets better.

Duckie430 said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 12:20 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

this is really good.. wow, alot of emotion, it's just really good...

on Nov. 17 2010 at 5:39 am
rundontwalk SILVER, Perth, Other
8 articles 8 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Go within and scale the depths of your being from which your very life springs forth."

-Rainer Maria Rilke

this is beautiful. really, truly beautiful.

it would be so awesome if you could look at some of my stuff even though they're nothing compared to this :)


on Oct. 4 2010 at 1:53 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

omg I love this . every line every word . . simply powerful . amazing job . please check and rate my work ? :)

on Jul. 8 2010 at 1:28 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

thats cool how this came straight from ur heart :) theres real meaning. good job ^^

on Jun. 18 2010 at 3:42 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u


Swiwi17 SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 2:33 pm
Swiwi17 SILVER, Glasscity, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing ever promised tomorrow today"

This is simply amazing

on May. 14 2010 at 9:08 am
Cancion_de_hielo_y_fuego BRONZE, Murfreesboro, Tennessee
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I really like how heartfelt this was: it really laid bare your emotions. Great job.

xxkelvin28xx said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:46 pm
i love it really good you know who this is =D

Hamburglar said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 6:28 am
Hamburglar, Sibley, Missouri
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This poem definitely has something a million other poems don't. It has feeling. The other poems that have been revised a thousand times and checked for spelling and edited for grammar and were created so mechanically don't have the emotion that this does. I hope you continue to write, and use writing as an emotional vent. Your writing is good.

on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:19 pm
dude, you should totallly teelll all your friends to rate this..its truly amazinq ! i hope it gets published yo, this is realll good stuf almost made me shed a tear loll.

meemee said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:17 pm
i loveed thiss !!

everyone should rate this five stars !

ii really hope it gets published (:

on Dec. 22 2009 at 4:30 pm
Claudia-Amador234 BRONZE, West Roxbury, Massachusetts
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This really good congrats

crazykim said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 10:38 pm
My favorite. Thanks so much for sharing this, you truly are so so talented.


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