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Walking down a street I once knew so well,
Everything seems so distant from me.
Sweet summer’s scents fill the air that I smell.
Strong winter’s cold blows around so freely.
Beautiful spring’s rain drizzles on the ground.
Gentle autumn’s leaves carried by the wind.
Yet, near or far, you’re nowhere to be found.
These thoughts only confined inside my mind.
I dread to think of all those times we shared.
I can’t tell. Do I laugh or shed a tear?
Will I know if you ever truly cared
Or be confused about this last passed year?
I’ll just give up. Don’t need to feel more pain
Because it’s so hard to walk memory lane.



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Milo! said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 11:48 am
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
BethPerez This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 11:10 pm
Awh. Thank you. I'm going to check out your stuff now.
 
bluemagnet22 said...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 3:33 pm
This poem gave me chills
Vry nicely written with good flow!
Keep up the good work! :)
 
Bethanatorrrr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 7:40 am
Thank you so much! That just made my day.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 12:37 pm
Ur welcome!
Reading ur poem made my day!
=)
 
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