Memory Lane

November 4, 2009
By BethPerez SILVER, New City, New York
BethPerez SILVER, New City, New York
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I won't be labeled as average" - Rachel Joy Scott


Walking down a street I once knew so well,
Everything seems so distant from me.
Sweet summer’s scents fill the air that I smell.
Strong winter’s cold blows around so freely.
Beautiful spring’s rain drizzles on the ground.
Gentle autumn’s leaves carried by the wind.
Yet, near or far, you’re nowhere to be found.
These thoughts only confined inside my mind.
I dread to think of all those times we shared.
I can’t tell. Do I laugh or shed a tear?
Will I know if you ever truly cared
Or be confused about this last passed year?
I’ll just give up. Don’t need to feel more pain
Because it’s so hard to walk memory lane.



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on Apr. 13 2010 at 11:10 pm
BethPerez SILVER, New City, New York
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I won't be labeled as average" - Rachel Joy Scott

Awh. Thank you. I'm going to check out your stuff now.

Milo! said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 11:48 am
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

on Nov. 20 2009 at 12:37 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Ur welcome!

Reading ur poem made my day!

=)

on Nov. 19 2009 at 7:40 am
BethPerez SILVER, New City, New York
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I won't be labeled as average" - Rachel Joy Scott

Thank you so much! That just made my day.

on Nov. 13 2009 at 3:33 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

This poem gave me chills

Vry nicely written with good flow!

Keep up the good work! :)


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