Mr. Unemployed

October 23, 2009
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His jeans have holes,
His shoes are well worn.
His head's hung low,
His spirit is torn.
His hair is greasy,
His face paints a frown.
His heart is broken,
His spirit is down.
His hands are scarred,
His eyes filled with tears,
His body displays the pain.
He's lived with for years.
His wallet is empty,
His house was foreclosed.
His dreams are demolished,
His mind consumed with woes.
His body is weary,
His faith has been shaken.
His bills are unpaid,
His job was taken.
His life has been altered,
His future he'll rewrite.
His world's a struggle,
His every day's a fight.

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Joyful_angel said...
Jan. 2, 2010 at 4:28 pm
I LOVED THIS CHRISTMAS!!! I GOT A BF!!! if i didnt get anything else, that wulda been fine! i got him, and thats all i needed.
Joyful_angel replied...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 3:08 pm
he goes to my skool...and we got 2 b friendz, and we rlly hit it off!! now hez the love of my life
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 12, 2010 at 9:55 am
Awe thats sweet:)
friends make the best lovers:)
Joyful_angel replied...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 5:46 pm
ya!!! thats so tru! he is a really awesome guy!!! the love of my life. this year is already going so well.
you have ny relationship?
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 12:24 pm
Yess:) My boyfriend n I have been dating for 7 months now <3 I rly do love him n he rly loves me too so it's preetty great:)
Joyful_angel replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 9:27 pm
well, i'm really happy for you... :)
my bf that i was tlking bout... well now is my X... :'( he broke up with me ystrday...
so i'm rlly depressed, but it'll pass
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 8:45 am
Awe I'm so sry:(
trust me theres more fish in the sea n it's his loss not urs:)
Joyful_angel replied...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 9:05 pm
i guess.... i am jus so sad... i still love him so much... he only broke up with me because he wanted to explore with other gurls.... and now he tells me that he still loves me, and he 'mite' wanna get bk 2gether... its so confusing... =/
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 9:37 am
boys...are so confusing!!!!
Me n my current bf went through that but we decided to have an open relationship but then we realized the only one we want is each other:)
Maybe it'll work out like that for u;)
Joyful_angel replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 6:27 pm
he still wants to be with me...and i still really like him... i jus dont kno wat 2 do... all my friends disapprove cuz they all kno he hurt me twice, so they disapprove of him....
Joyful_angel said...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 11:00 am
and tru talent is recognized, and u definetly have it!! ur work is awesome~
n thnx...sumtimes i feel like i am bad w/ poems, evn though i write ALOT!~
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 8:51 am
You're rly great too:)
Don't underestimate urself:)
Joyful_angel replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 5:25 pm
u think i am really great??? i wish i culd hear more of that from other people... i dnt hear it alot
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 1:18 pm
Yep:) they most not appreciate good poetry then lol;) one thing ive learned with writing is not everyone will like ur stuff u just have to kno what u write is good n if it meant something to one person it was worth it to put it on paper lol so keep writing cuz i enjoy r stuff:))
Joyful_angel replied...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 10:07 pm
i am glad that u enjoy my stuff. that really means alot!!! and i njoy ur stuff too!!!
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 11:52 am
That's good lol
Joyful_angel replied...
Dec. 27, 2009 at 12:40 pm
haha, ya. hope you had a good christmas.
i hope u submit more work~ (:
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 27, 2009 at 7:21 pm
I had a wonderful Christmas! I hope you did too! lol did Santa bring you anything good??
Actually I have four poems pending.... so hopefully u'll get to read em soon:))
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 27, 2009 at 7:24 pm
U gotta keep submitting more stuff too;D
Joyful_angel replied...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 7:54 pm
i had a great Christmas!!! nd i got alot of stuff. most that i wanted. the thing that i got that mde me the happiest was getting a bf, and finding the love of my life!
i will defiently submit more stuff. i have like 2 things pending
Joyful_angel replied...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 2:34 pm
this was the best christmas!! i am soooo happy!
wat was the best thing u got?
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