Gone Away

October 20, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I am gone,
Yet I was here.
You are sitting,
Where I was near.
I slept in this bed,
I sat in that chair.
And though I'm not present,
I breathed this air.
I stayed in this room,
Yet left no trace.
I have now moved on,
To a different place.
No one knows,
Where that may be.
Our paths may cross,
Lets wait and see...


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem in a hotel room and left it in the desk. I now keep a copy with me and I leave wherever I stay so next time your at a hotel...maybe this poem will be there too...

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on Aug. 13 2015 at 8:41 pm
futurista12 ELITE, Far Rockaway, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"And though she be but little, she is fierce."- Shakespeare

That's really cool how you leave your poem in hotel rooms. I hope I see it one day! When I stay in hotels, I like to leave a note to the people who clean the room just to say thank you.

on Feb. 24 2012 at 11:16 pm
I love this poem! Well written!

on Sep. 23 2011 at 5:08 am
Countrylife4 GOLD, Maine
11 articles 4 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Someday soon we're gonna catch that dream we've been chasing"
"Seven days without a horse makes one weak."
"The worst part of riding is when you dismount."

Insult my clothes, I say, “Okay, thanks for the compliment.”
Insult the way I look, I say, “Thanks for notifying me.”
Mock me and say riding isn’t a sport, and I’ll say,”You say that ’cause you can’t ride.” But before you make fun of my horse, make sure you have “911″ on your speed dial.

That's amazing! keep on writing away! :)

Twinny said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:15 pm
This poem made great rhyming&&amazing imagery.!:)

on Nov. 22 2010 at 2:29 pm
Inlove4ever BRONZE, Haddenham, Other
2 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have loved you forever and forever will!

OMG!!!!!

that is amazing!!

you are amazing writing, keep up the writing i'd love to see more!

 


on Aug. 1 2010 at 10:58 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you so much!

on Aug. 1 2010 at 12:03 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

awesome job ♥

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:40 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I'm so glad u think so:)

Thank u;D


Chelz PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 1:25 pm
Chelz PLATINUM, Iron Mountain, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, bite into it and embrace the bitter taste of reality." (My own words)

This poem is awesome!!

on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:28 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Sweet! thanx lol but don't think i copied it from the movie lol i wrote it yrs ago n now it's hidden in MANY hotel rooms lol

booboo360 said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 2:45 pm
when i read this poem that is wat i thought of, the lovely bones.. u r so amazing!!!!!! i can just picture susie { the main character} and it makes me sad.

booboo360 said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 2:42 pm
omg u should read the lovely bones by alice sebold

on Dec. 11 2009 at 7:00 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Yaaa but creepy is always kinda fun lol =P

on Dec. 11 2009 at 3:20 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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I totally love your writing style! You know, if I found this poem somewhere, I'd find it kinda creepy and stalker-ish, haha. But I do like it and it's very well-written. Totally admirable (:

on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:16 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Oh I love the fortune cookie idea so neat! Ya it's exciting to leave something behind cuz it's like a piece of u is always there n always will be! Kinda creepy but totally cool!

on Nov. 2 2009 at 4:23 pm
lindseymarie SILVER, Richfield, Minnesota
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This is really neat :]

I love the idea of leaving mysterious things behind for people to find.

It brings a joy to mind you can't explain.

A friend of mine likes leaving fortune cookie fortunes for her waiters when she eats out.

on Nov. 2 2009 at 2:43 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx:) I'm glad they do that;)

pno4eva said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 11:28 am
thanx...but urs really touch me...

on Oct. 29 2009 at 11:25 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx! lol I love leavin it places n keepin track of where i left it...i once stayed in the same hotel room n my poem was still there...i thought it pretty neat...n thanx for ur comment:)

on Oct. 28 2009 at 9:46 pm
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If you have them, flaunt them" -Circle of Friends

"may the saddest day of the future be no worse then the happiest day of your past" -irish blessing

If male homosexuals are called "gay," then female homosexuals should be called "ecstatic."

i love it, and that is an amazing idea to leave this at every hotel you stay at!


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