Beautiful Is Shoes

October 14, 2009
By HaileyMercer BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
HaileyMercer BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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My beautiful shoes
Heels, sandals, flats and sneakers
All colors and styles.

Shoe laces tied tight
Nike, Uggs, and converse
Keeping my toes warm.

Stripes, stars, bows or plain
Making sure my feet don’t hurt
My beautiful shoes.


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Yoodle15 said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 12:21 pm
The poem's simplicity is what makes it sweeeeet =)

on Oct. 31 2009 at 1:45 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

just looked it up myself: 14 lines, iambic pentameter, ryhme scheme: a-b-a-b-c-d-c-d-e-f-e-f-g-g

on Oct. 31 2009 at 1:40 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

hey great poem. but it doesn't really fit the REALLY SPECEFIC criteria for a sonnet. maybe google sonnet for the exact line and syllable #s. i'd call it more freestyle than sonnet. but other than that, i liked it. keep up the great work


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