Beautiful Is Shoes

My beautiful shoes
Heels, sandals, flats and sneakers
All colors and styles.

Shoe laces tied tight
Nike, Uggs, and converse
Keeping my toes warm.

Stripes, stars, bows or plain
Making sure my feet don’t hurt
My beautiful shoes.





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Yoodle15 said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 12:21 pm
The poem's simplicity is what makes it sweeeeet =)
 
alex9426 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 31, 2009 at 1:40 pm
hey great poem. but it doesn't really fit the REALLY SPECEFIC criteria for a sonnet. maybe google sonnet for the exact line and syllable #s. i'd call it more freestyle than sonnet. but other than that, i liked it. keep up the great work
 
alex9426 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 31, 2009 at 1:45 pm
just looked it up myself: 14 lines, iambic pentameter, ryhme scheme: a-b-a-b-c-d-c-d-e-f-e-f-g-g
 
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