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They rise; they fall, ever so countlessly
In the heat of battle, they rise to fight
As one falls another takes his place
They charge the enemy while brothers fall
Bullets whiz by as they fearlessly die
When brothers die, others break down and cry
The amount that have fallen will not compare

The risen shall raised the flag of glory
They all cheer for their own victory
The fallen watch in silence at the flag
That their brothers have risen for them
When they get home families cry for joy
And sons and daughters mourn their deadly loss
They are brothers in battle





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Bren_Bren said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 6:43 pm
I thought it was very touching and most of all very good....... you are truely a good writer
 
irislynne said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 6:29 pm
Very nice Tobbie, you are growing up to be such a wonderful man. I sure miss the little boy you once were when we lived at Travis!
 
Alexx627 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 2:49 pm
Vry Cool! I enjoyed it alot! I'm actually joining the Air Force next month!
 
Lixxy_93 said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 1:54 am
absolutly amazing. my father is thinking about joining the marines so this kind of writing hits close to my heart right now.
 
bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 12:08 pm
Wow,vry good and the meaning behind it is even better:)
 
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