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I looked upon the sky one peaceful night
While I was gloomly strolling ‘long the shore.
A gaze at stars so countless and so bright
Had made me think about my grief no more.


I pondered over planets’ splendid grace;
Of black holes, comets, all the glorious things.
I longed to see the great Creator’s face
To thank Him for the joy His handwork brings.


But men today say there is no Divine,
Convinced that all was brought forth just through fate.
“From specks to worlds we know of,” they explain,
“And wonders went on blooming to this date.”


But see from birth of space to man’s advance.
Oh, how could these have happened all by chance?



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luisa said...
Oct. 25, 2009 at 7:39 am:
Very nice...
 
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Dean said...
Oct. 25, 2009 at 7:31 am:
Poem is interesting and well written. Keep it up!
 
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pilgrim6295 said...
Oct. 25, 2009 at 4:23 am:
Very true and very profound ... the "watchmaker" is not blind :)
 
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Stargazer said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 11:11 pm:
This is awesome:)
 
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doveglion said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 10:53 pm:
Great Poem!!! expecting to see more of this kind....
 
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Fayrouz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 6:52 pm:
Phenomenal :) The words you pick out just really hold the reader astounded. I respect that opinion you have in the poem.
 
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dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 1:33 pm:
wow :) this is amazing! it has great, deep meaning :) and the rhythm is perfect! it's a great poem! it's also very creative! :) bravo...5 stars :) check out some of my work if you can, i would love your opinion!
 
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bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 12:14 pm:
Wow, I'm speechless...it's so well written and the flow...wow! You should check out some of my stuff...Please
 
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