Is It Just Meaningless Beauty?

October 16, 2009
By Dan Justin Simpelo GOLD, New City, New York
Dan Justin Simpelo GOLD, New City, New York
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I looked upon the sky one peaceful night
While I was gloomly strolling ‘long the shore.
A gaze at stars so countless and so bright
Had made me think about my grief no more.


I pondered over planets’ splendid grace;
Of black holes, comets, all the glorious things.
I longed to see the great Creator’s face
To thank Him for the joy His handwork brings.


But men today say there is no Divine,
Convinced that all was brought forth just through fate.
“From specks to worlds we know of,” they explain,
“And wonders went on blooming to this date.”


But see from birth of space to man’s advance.
Oh, how could these have happened all by chance?


The author's comments:
I hope that people would sometimes see the existence of all things, including their own, in my perspective.

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on Oct. 25 2009 at 4:59 pm
His Justin. Your poem is wonderful! It shows you believe in the biblical account of creation. Good work!

pastorsam said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 9:59 am
Great job! I love it. Keep it up you have a great future ahead of you. I'm proud of you.

luisa said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 7:39 am
Very nice...

Dean said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 7:31 am
Poem is interesting and well written. Keep it up!

pilgrim6295 said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 4:23 am
Very true and very profound ... the "watchmaker" is not blind :)

Stargazer said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 11:11 pm
This is awesome:)

doveglion said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 10:53 pm
Great Poem!!! expecting to see more of this kind....

Fayrouz SILVER said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 6:52 pm
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

Phenomenal :) The words you pick out just really hold the reader astounded. I respect that opinion you have in the poem.

on Oct. 23 2009 at 1:33 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow :) this is amazing! it has great, deep meaning :) and the rhythm is perfect! it's a great poem! it's also very creative! :) bravo...5 stars :) check out some of my work if you can, i would love your opinion!

on Oct. 23 2009 at 12:14 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Wow, I'm speechless...it's so well written and the flow...wow! You should check out some of my stuff...Please




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