If i Were king

October 15, 2009
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If I was the king
I would make you my queen
Even if our
Love had to go unseen
And if you were an angel
And I burned in hell
I would still love you
Even if I couldn’t tell
You are a star
Way up in my sky
While I’m stuck down on earth
Wishing I could fly
Up into space
And try to find you
I feel so confused
Nothing else left to do
Because I know the truth
That we will never be
But when I close my eyes at night
You’re all I can see.

Shattered Hope

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Swanson said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:04 pm
I enjoyed reading this poem because it was a nice declaration of love.
Nicovera said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 6:26 pm
I liked it, but I have yet to find a poem under 'sonnets' that is a true sonnet. Irritating, but unavoidable. Well written; keep it up
Lixxy_93 said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 6:48 pm
this is amazing, and puts into words exactly how i feel right now. wonderful ~<3
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 1:36 pm
wow :) i think its a bit shaky at some parts, but all around its a wonderful poem! :) the flow is great, and i love how sweet and honest the poem is :) the last four lines are my favorite...it almost made my heart break! :) all around a great poem-i can feel all the emotion. bravo :) 5 stars! check out some of my work and comment, i would love to hear what you have to say. oh and keep writing! :)
Alexx627 replied...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 2:51 pm
lol don't repeat yourself :P
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 1:35 pm
wow! :) its a bit shaky at parts, but all around i think it's great! the last four lines of the poem are for sure my favorite...it almost made my heart break! this is just a great poem :) i love it. keep writing :) oh and check out some of my work if you could, i would LOVE your opinion.
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