If i Were king

October 15, 2009
By Codykinz BRONZE, Foster City, California
Codykinz BRONZE, Foster City, California
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Favorite Quote:
I didnt punch you! you ran into my fist!


If I was the king
I would make you my queen
Even if our
Love had to go unseen
And if you were an angel
And I burned in hell
I would still love you
Even if I couldn’t tell
You are a star
Way up in my sky
While I’m stuck down on earth
Wishing I could fly
Up into space
And try to find you
I feel so confused
Nothing else left to do
Because I know the truth
That we will never be
But when I close my eyes at night
You’re all I can see.


Shattered Hope

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Swanson said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:04 pm
I enjoyed reading this poem because it was a nice declaration of love.

on Jan. 7 2010 at 6:26 pm
Arluanna PLATINUM, Broken Arrow, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
“Mwahahahahaha! Now you are mine, Lesley-Bird, finally, at last, in my... oh, drat, forgot it had wings...”

-Phil, the youngest Kalins Uzin

I liked it, but I have yet to find a poem under 'sonnets' that is a true sonnet. Irritating, but unavoidable. Well written; keep it up

on Dec. 11 2009 at 6:48 pm
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If you have them, flaunt them" -Circle of Friends

"may the saddest day of the future be no worse then the happiest day of your past" -irish blessing

If male homosexuals are called "gay," then female homosexuals should be called "ecstatic."

this is amazing, and puts into words exactly how i feel right now. wonderful ~<3

Alexx627 said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:51 pm
Alexx627, Moline, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
If you do what you did then you'll get what you got

lol don't repeat yourself :P

on Oct. 23 2009 at 1:36 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow :) i think its a bit shaky at some parts, but all around its a wonderful poem! :) the flow is great, and i love how sweet and honest the poem is :) the last four lines are my favorite...it almost made my heart break! :) all around a great poem-i can feel all the emotion. bravo :) 5 stars! check out some of my work and comment, i would love to hear what you have to say. oh and keep writing! :)

on Oct. 23 2009 at 1:35 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow! :) its a bit shaky at parts, but all around i think it's great! the last four lines of the poem are for sure my favorite...it almost made my heart break! this is just a great poem :) i love it. keep writing :) oh and check out some of my work if you could, i would LOVE your opinion.


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