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We were so wrong,
That we made it right.
We slept through the day,
And only talked at night.
We never told the truth,
We only lied.
We always laughed,
When we should have cried.
We were never bland,
We had to add spice.
We were always naughty,
But rarely nice.
We used the words hate,
Instead of using love.
We fell into a ditch,
Instead of rising above.




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RanaHewezi1998 said...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 10:39 pm:
i'm sorry the relationship didn't work out :( nicely written
 
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DisicpleofChristandJesusEnthusiast said...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 3:38 pm:

Nicely written, refreshing. Great job.

 

 
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lovemeso14 said...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 2:03 pm:
I definitely can relate to tis. Amazing work, great job :')
 
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kat27 said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 4:44 pm:
very short. thumbs up.
 
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Bren_Bren said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 6:23 pm:
This poem is great!! Love it
 
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introducing.me_899This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 3, 2011 at 11:04 am:
ooh, kool rhyming, awesome poem :D it was worded nicely.. Great job, i liked it!!
 
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avantgarde said...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 7:34 pm:

I love the realness of this poem! Very lovely, but it's not a sonnet. Sonnets have ten syllables per line, and their rhyme scheme goes like this:

 ABABCDCDEFEFGG

But nice work anyways :)

 
foolish_dork replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 11:04 am :
indeed...agree with ya as well
 
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ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 8:53 am:

this is really good :) keep it up

please come check out some of my work =]

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:27 am :
Thank you!!
 
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PoetryLovesMe said...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 9:05 pm:
really nice work i can totally see why it ddnt work out nice job .. i really like the rhyming!! plz check out my work thnx!!!:]
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:25 am :
Thank you:) ya it's just a lil bit obvious right?!? lol
 
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Miseltoe said...
May 7, 2010 at 5:35 pm:
Nice... I like how your poem can apply to many types of relationships not just a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship. Its refreshing
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
May 11, 2010 at 3:06 pm :
Thank U:):)
 
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LuckyThree said...
May 3, 2010 at 8:27 am:
pretty simple, but solid.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
May 11, 2010 at 3:06 pm :
thanx:) :D
 
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GreenLover said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:07 pm:
i love the way it ryhmes. and i could see why i didnt work out. nice job keep writting. would you mind taking a look at my poem called my child, my son. i really appreciate the feedback
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
May 11, 2010 at 3:06 pm :
Thank u n ofcoarse i'll check it out:)
 
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Sweet2bme2 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 12:09 pm:
this was really good. it had a nice rhyme scheme and i understood exactly what it was saying
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:18 pm :
Yay I'm glad:) Thank u I appreciate your comment:)
 
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