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Beyond the Starlight Sky


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My Dina you’re wiser than wise
Oh, what your eyes can see!
You’re the only one who understands
My curiosity
So please tell me...
Why does the whispering wind
sound like a lullaby?
Is that the magic music
from beyond
the starlight sky?
Why can’t the swallows remain?
Where is the place they fly?
Why can’t I go along
with them
beyond the starlight sky?
If I climb the highest tree
where oh where would I be?
Would I find a place for me
in the land of grand enchantment?
Where do the clouds disappear
when they go rolling by?
I’m wondering about the world
beyond the starlight sky!



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JuliaRubyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 8:15 pm:
beautiful and enchanting
 
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FluteWriter said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 9:10 pm:
I dont know if this is from a song, if it is then that plagiarism and could into serioues trouble. Its really good (if its yours) but its not a Sonnet.
 
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andreamarie5683 said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 4:57 pm:
...yeah isn't this "beyond the laughing sky"? the deleted song from alice and wonderland.....?
 
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cloak said...
May 1, 2011 at 8:59 pm:
It's funny how you just took the lirycs from DIsney and changed a word. And people think that it's your original work. Shame on you.
 
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Allthegoodnamesaretaken said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 9:55 am:
It should be starLIT not starlight using correct grammar but other than that, it's really good.
 
HazyeyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 9:39 pm :
i agree with that!! it is good and being grammatically correct it would be starlit not starlight
 
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shreya756 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 10:58 am:
I totally agree with the previous statement. It makes me want to meet the narrator. A magical and enchanting poem.
 
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HMessinger said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 12:29 pm:
I love the excitment the narrator has! It makes me want to meet her. Beautiful job!
 
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peacelovepoetry said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 11:11 am:
this is such a beautiful poem!!! it's so cute :)
 
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life_of_a_leaf said...
Jan. 5, 2010 at 2:58 pm:
i like its liveliness. very cool
 
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bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 3:02 pm:
It's vry enchanting...I enjoyed it:) You should check out some of my poems;)
 
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Lixxy_93 said...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 1:30 am:
i love this one, it asks the questions all our hearts ask about nature but we never really look for the answers
 
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Ruthey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 4:50 am:
I really like this poem; it's conversational, it draws the reader in, and it's funny and joyful. it could have ended up being a total cliche but actually you've handled it really well while still making it accessible to the reader. well done! id really appreciate if you could have a look at my poetry too. thanks!
 
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Lisha said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 2:02 am:
Beautiful :)
 
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