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Take my Heart and Break It

Take my broken heart,
and rip it from my chest.
Steal away my soul,
and finally put me to rest.

I dreamt about you day and night,
and I wanted you to be mine.
You watched me in my hardest days,
and sometimes you watched me shine.

Every time I saw you,
my heart would skip a beat.
Every time you said my name,
I would spring out of my seat.

I loved you with my heart and soul.
I loved you year after year.
But something always kept us apart:
our confusion, our chances, our fear.

But now there is no hope for us,
we are doomed to be apart.
Maybe I won't feel the pain
if you completely break my heart.



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justagirlwithsomepoetry said...
Apr. 25, 2011 at 7:42 pm:
This is amazing! How did this not make it into the magazine?!
 
BlakeAyrl replied...
May 11, 2011 at 8:12 am :
yeah this should have it's own section its amazing
 
dreamer_believer replied...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 8:05 pm :
ahh thanks SO much for thinking that! i've been trying to get a piece of mine in the magazine...but no luck yet :/ hopefully soon though! thanks a bunch for your comments :) i'm glad you guys like the poem!
 
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vampier said...
Apr. 21, 2011 at 9:00 am:
one time i rote a pome like this but my pome was more in deep and in soul... but even thow you put out your felling on here i thank that you did grate.....!
 
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Fawny This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 10:14 pm:
this is a really great poem!!! lots of emotion, it flows well. true talent
 
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eyeadoreu2 said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 12:52 pm:
this is crazy good omg i love the details you are a REALLY GOOD poet
 
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shaykapri said...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 7:19 pm:
I love this poem!!                          I can totally relate!!!!
 
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Leahrose211 said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:03 pm:
the picture in this poem is cute. loved the rhyme scheme.
 
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I.believe said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 1:48 am:
I love this poem!!! It's great!! You are very descriptive, and it all makes an image in my mind, a mind movie. I could really relate to it, but i think a lot of people could.  I don't know what else to say, I'm kind of speechless.
 
dreamer_believer replied...
Sept. 30, 2011 at 3:51 pm :
wow, thanks :) i'm glad you could "see" everything i was putting together in this poem. i'm happy you enjoyed it :)
 
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hahahahahah said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 8:50 am:
this is WOW
 
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Bren_Bren said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 10:01 pm:
When I read your poem I can actually make a connection with what you were saying........ I really love this poem because I can truely relate to it!! check out my poem and let me kno what you think
 
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VolcanicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 2:23 pm:
Love! So relatable. Great poem. (:
 
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Rox18 said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 3:51 pm:
this rhyme scheme is amazing the way the poem sounds in rhythm and in tune is well done. and the emotion felt is poewrful. goodjob :]
 
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Ria Clarl <3 said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 4:51 pm:
Hi, i just wanted to inform you that you did an excellent job on th sonnet poem.  It really touched me & made me come to realize that people get heartbroken all the time but you just have too let whomever out of your life. ***** (5 stars)
 
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Emily H. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:39 pm:
Beautiful work. (:
 
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cookiecrepes said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 1:26 pm:
I love it!! Everyone goes through this no matter who...i uset to never want to hear that a person you like isnt good enough for you, but now i cant take it and no problem
 
Bren_Bren replied...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 10:04 pm :
I really do agree with you on that...... check out my poem and tell me what you think
 
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Chips on a sunday said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 1:14 pm:
I just love love love this poem! keep writing because you are so great
 
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KingReject said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 9:59 am:
I feel exactly the same at the moment....five stars.
 
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