Take my Heart and Break It

October 11, 2009
By jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."


Take my broken heart,
and rip it from my chest.
Steal away my soul,
and finally put me to rest.

I dreamt about you day and night,
and I wanted you to be mine.
You watched me in my hardest days,
and sometimes you watched me shine.

Every time I saw you,
my heart would skip a beat.
Every time you said my name,
I would spring out of my seat.

I loved you with my heart and soul.
I loved you year after year.
But something always kept us apart:
our confusion, our chances, our fear.

But now there is no hope for us,
we are doomed to be apart.
Maybe I won't feel the pain
if you completely break my heart.


The author's comments:
Most of the time relationships grow from the innocence of a best friend. This is my poem explaining how it feels to realize that. This is also to express the awful truth when you discover that you can never be together.

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on Jul. 1 2012 at 6:14 pm
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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This is marvelous! Could you check out some of my newer stuff?? :D

hypermagical said...
on Jun. 22 2012 at 4:05 am
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can quote me on that.

This is gorgeous, I love it! You had me from the first line :)

on May. 24 2012 at 1:36 pm
"What I want for Christmas..."

on May. 17 2012 at 7:56 am
JessicaRae7 GOLD, Buffalo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Music is the air we breathe." ~Molly Rae Berger
"Being sad is a waste of time." ~Molly Rae Berger
"Girls should never be afraid to be smart." - Emma Watson

Wow this is really good. Loved it!

on May. 14 2012 at 9:12 am
Khadisha BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Obstacles are those things that we see when we take our eyes off of our goal" "UNKNOWN"

This is a really good poem.The first sentence is what caught my attention. It really pulled me in.

on May. 11 2012 at 10:03 pm
The_Open_Heart GOLD, Lincoln, Nebraska
14 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some people come into your life for a reason, a season, or a lifetime."

I know how it feels. I am going through that same thing right now. I love this poem. One of my favorites so far :)

on May. 6 2012 at 6:05 pm
decievinghimesama SILVER, Cebu, Other
9 articles 2 photos 20 comments
With this poem,  you broke my heart in the most amazing way! It's a beautiful piece :3

on Apr. 11 2012 at 8:35 pm
DramaKid BRONZE, Houston, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Sleep the sleep that knows not breaking; morn of toil nor night of waking... -Sir Walter Scott

Amazing... i felt the whole story in my hesrt

on Apr. 3 2012 at 7:06 pm
Graybass17 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve"

I really enjoyed the truth in this.  It's always great when someone writes about a topic most can relate too.  Keep it up!

on Mar. 26 2012 at 4:01 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
"it's impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default."
-J.K.Rowling

I love this!! It's really good pease keep writing

Jen26 said...
on Feb. 10 2012 at 9:13 pm
I love this!I almost cried when I read it because it deals with what I'm going through

normgrl GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 5:24 pm
normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
13 articles 11 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do we eat to live or live to eat?

Hey, I just wanted to say how much I loved your poem. And, how I have tears in my eyes - literally no joke, as I'm typing this because of how relatable it is to my situation. Thank you for writing this

on Jan. 28 2012 at 9:26 am
HinataHyuga SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
To never give up is my nindo, my ninja way. I can't run before taking my first step. A place to return to is were someone always thinks of you. Naruto-kun. Miso ramen. Back off kushina tomato Minato is mine! Kingmortha is my BFFFFF on teenink!

WHO CARES IF ITS NOT A SONNET! WHY CANT ALL POETRY BE FREE VERSE THERE IS NO LAW WHEN IT COMES TO POETRY! I LOVED IT

on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:46 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

this is not a sonnet. but great nevertheless. i loveeee it!

on Dec. 28 2011 at 6:45 pm
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
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I really loved the last 2 stanzas! Please look at my poem. It would really make me happy

on Dec. 24 2011 at 5:37 pm
AbandonedSoul BRONZE, Baldwin Park, California
3 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For it so falls out
That what we have we prize not to the worth,
Whiles we enjoy it, but being lack’d and lost,
Why, then we rack the value; then we find
The virtue, that possession would not show us
Whiles it was ours" - William Shakespeare

As awesome as this poem is, it does not have the rhyme scheme of a sonnet. It is a great free-verse, though.

EllieHeart said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 5:43 pm
EllieHeart, Tempe, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Pay no attention to what the critics say; no statue has ever been erected to a critic."










~Jean Sibelius

Amazing! Can you check out my poem Siren Lies? I'd really appreciate your feedback! And again, beautiful!

on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:27 pm
Avalon,Liv GOLD, Nelson, Other
14 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Loved you once love you still always have always will.~ Theres always a little truth behind every "just kidding" a little knowledge behind every " i don't know"~ a little emotion behind every " i don"t care"~ And a little pain behind every "I'm Okay".

abasalutely can relate to this, this is amazing putting it into words like this ! <3

SydneyV BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 2:28 pm
SydneyV BRONZE, Henry, Tennessee
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not what you do but who you are.

Great poem.. it relates to one of my past relationships. Dont worry you will find someone soon enough. there is someone out there for everyone. You have so much talent! Keep Writing

on Dec. 7 2011 at 3:11 pm
amber-was-here, Climax Springs, Missouri
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a teardrop.

Omg.. I absolutely loved this poem!! <3




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