Take my Heart and Break It

October 11, 2009
Take my broken heart,
and rip it from my chest.
Steal away my soul,
and finally put me to rest.

I dreamt about you day and night,
and I wanted you to be mine.
You watched me in my hardest days,
and sometimes you watched me shine.

Every time I saw you,
my heart would skip a beat.
Every time you said my name,
I would spring out of my seat.

I loved you with my heart and soul.
I loved you year after year.
But something always kept us apart:
our confusion, our chances, our fear.

But now there is no hope for us,
we are doomed to be apart.
Maybe I won't feel the pain
if you completely break my heart.





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dailykarma said...
Aug. 21 at 11:58 pm
Well written but a truly great poet can be strong and vulnerable. Poetry is not always about ryhming but the truth of one's heart.
 
NJacobY said...
Apr. 12 at 6:14 pm
Truly relatable.
 
foreiignxx said...
Jan. 14, 2015 at 6:33 pm
soo awesome! can anyone help me create a sonnet? ive never done one before
 
Sarelle said...
Nov. 20, 2014 at 12:18 pm
Awesome, i love it
 
Angeline3 said...
Oct. 5, 2014 at 10:01 pm
This is very well written, so beautiful!
 
Lorine F. said...
May 15, 2014 at 1:13 pm
This is so true.
 
thomas said...
Apr. 21, 2014 at 3:48 pm
This is so true when i was in 8th grade.
 
findmeifyoucan said...
Dec. 7, 2013 at 6:56 am
WOW. this one is great!
 
Wolfira said...
Oct. 26, 2013 at 10:26 pm
This is the most beautiful thing I have read in a very long time. Love it!
 
hawaiianbeluga said...
Sept. 30, 2013 at 10:41 pm
This is such a great poem. Not only does it apply to something that everyday teens can have, but it kind of puts a whole perspective on life in a nutshell. Things like this, love or not, are always going to happen in life and our feelings are really effected along the way. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to the feeling you perfectly capture. Awesome job!
 
Gooseman said...
Aug. 26, 2013 at 1:38 pm
Beautifuly written poem. 
 
Jay-Wolf said...
Aug. 7, 2013 at 12:37 pm
You did great personaly i'm not old enough to date let alone BF/GF so i don't know quite what your talking about, I'm just a shadow. Quick thought shouldn't  sonnets be in Iambic Pentamater, its a pain but it's worth it. Again brillant emotion but make sure you keep the mechanics :)
 
dark_armor1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 8, 2013 at 10:41 pm
WOW just wow. like honestly love this poem!
 
jennee21_ann replied...
Jun. 27, 2013 at 1:06 pm
im glad you enjoyed it!! thank you! (:
 
Harri said...
May 6, 2013 at 5:25 pm
Wow...That is really well written.  I loved it.
 
LadyTrina2 said...
May 6, 2013 at 11:38 am
I Truly LOVE & ADORE This Poem !!!!! It Decribes What I Feel !!! GREAT JOB !!!!!
 
EmanP727 said...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 11:17 pm
This poem is nicely written !! It expresses so much truth
 
warboy said...
Apr. 12, 2013 at 8:20 pm
This poem gave me the best answer to the thoughts i was thinking about. Thank You ! :')
 
cottoncandy28 said...
Mar. 8, 2013 at 7:12 pm
this is a great poem. I liked how  the ryhmes flowed. I'm a writer myself, so I know what's good. and this poem is amazing
 
Marylu_251 said...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 9:52 am
I love your poem! It has true meaning, I already have a relationship like this right now. :(
 
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