"All I Ask"

October 10, 2009
By mee-mee SILVER, Orlando, Florida
mee-mee SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"we all have dreams. but always remember with that dream comes a star. trust in yourself, believe in who you are. with nothing but confidence you will go far."
-mee-mee hoskins






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I ASKED YOU TO LISTEN
YOU REFUSED.

I ASKED YOU TO LOVE ME
YOU DID NOTHING BUT HATE ME.

I AKSED YOU FOR OPEN ARMS.
YOU CLOSED THEM TIGHT AND WALKED AWAY.

I ASKED YOU FOR ADVICE AND YOU DENIED MY REPLY AND GAVE ME MORE PROBLEMS TO LIVE FOR.

I ASKED YOU FOR FORGIVENESS
BUT INSTEAD YOU KEPT GUILT AND ANGER.

I ASKED YOU TO LISTEN TO MY LOVE SONG, MY CRY
BUT ALL YOU DID WAS GIVE ME A MEANINGFUL SIGH.

I WANTED NOTHING BUT A CLOSE MOTHER DAUGHTER REALTIONSHIP
BUT INSTEAD YOU DISSED ME FOR A BRAND NEW MAN.

I TRIED MY BEST GAVE ALL MY MIGHT
BUT ALL YOU DID WAS LEFT ME TO SUFFER LEFT ME TO REPENT FOR ALL THE WRONG DOING.

NOW I HAVE NOTHING BUT A TEAR.
A TEAR YOU LEFT ME WITH A CHALLENGE, A CHOICE TO CHOOSE.

THE LORD FATHER GOD SAID DON'T HATE YOU
SO I WON'T.

BUT I REFUSED TO LET SUFFERNESS AND HATRID DOWN MY THROAT.

WHEN I CAME INTO THIS WORLD I HAVE GOTTEN NOTHING BUT LOVE
BUT NOW AS A TEEN NO GRATITUDE IS SHOWN FROM THE ONE I LOOKED UP TO.

NOW I'M MS. INDEPENDENT, THE ONE HAS THE MIND OF HER OWN.
THE ONE THAT DOESN'T NEED THE CRTISISM OR TO BE TREATED LIKE A PHONE.
TO BE USED WHEN NEEDED OR SHOW NO RESPECT.
THE ONE THAT NEEDS ABSOLUTLY NO ONE BREATHING DOWN HER NECK.

THANK YOU FOR BRINGING ME THE TRUTH.
I'M DONE NOW SO I SOLUTE.


The author's comments:
i wrote this poem to show that yes, feelings do matter. and i know i was not the only teen who went through hard times with my mother. i wont to grasp young teens my age that your not alone. hold on. keep your head up. your loved.

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mee-mee SILVER said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 12:31 pm
mee-mee SILVER, Orlando, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we all have dreams. but always remember with that dream comes a star. trust in yourself, believe in who you are. with nothing but confidence you will go far."
-mee-mee hoskins






quote written by:mee mee hoskins

thank you quys sooo much .

on Sep. 9 2010 at 8:51 pm
LovelyMiss GOLD, Floresville, Texas
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i agree this was really great!

on Jul. 19 2010 at 11:00 am
KiNABABE SILVER, Lakewood, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"WHATS MEANT T0 BE WiLL ALWAYS FiND iTS WAY"

powerful ! keep writng


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