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When I look into the mirror,
The reflection I see is you.
I no longer recognize myself,
I wish that wasn't true.
Everyday I'm pretending,
I'm disguised with lies.
You are my new identity,
You're the soul behind my eyes.
The only thing I can hear,
Is your voice inside my head.
Where have I gone,
The real me seems dead.
I don't remember who I was,
You have been me for so long.
You made my like seem right,
When everything appeared wrong.
I am captive in your love,
In your chains I am bound.
I'm searching for myself.
The true me needs to be found.



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kiwi12 said...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 3:02 pm
oh my goodness this flows so well, i love it. and it really describes what you're describing.... fantastic job.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 2, 2010 at 11:25 am
Thank you so much:)
I love knowing pple can understand n feel the eomtion in my poems:)
 
Babydoll said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 12:34 pm
I think it really tells some one the issues teens go through. thank you for being brave enough to write about it. you should check out some of my work
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 9:01 am
Thank you i rly appreciate ur comment
it's vry encouraging
 
Joyful_angel said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 7:49 pm
this poem is so awesome!!!! i really like it, and i think all gurls can relate to it.
~keep writtin~
 
musicisthespiceoflife This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 12:29 pm
This is a great! I think it expresses the feelings of many teen girls today. The quest to be original but still blend in is a hard path, but an important one.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 2:41 pm
Thank you :)
 
kila replied...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 11:41 am
i really like your poem. i really think that your a good poem writer.
 
Ashlie94 said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 2:55 pm
Amazing. I love it. and great quote!! =)
 
Inkspired said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 7:22 pm
Love this, the rhyming is great and the emotions are so true! By the way, I love your quote! "Remember, you were born an original so why die a copy!" Beautiful.
 
kiwi12 replied...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 3:03 pm
me too, i love that quote. definitely writing it down somewhere...
 
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