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When I look into the mirror,
The reflection I see is you.
I no longer recognize myself,
I wish that wasn't true.
Everyday I'm pretending,
I'm disguised with lies.
You are my new identity,
You're the soul behind my eyes.
The only thing I can hear,
Is your voice inside my head.
Where have I gone,
The real me seems dead.
I don't remember who I was,
You have been me for so long.
You made my like seem right,
When everything appeared wrong.
I am captive in your love,
In your chains I am bound.
I'm searching for myself.
The true me needs to be found.




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CyndiDarling. said...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 2:49 pm:
You Are Very Talented(:. I'm Jealous xD.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 9:22 pm :
Oh thank you:) n don't be jealous I'm sure ur an amazing writer also!;)
 
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ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 11:29 am:

OMG ! OMG ! OMG ! This is AMAZING ! iLove it 

That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:35 am :
Thank you! thank you! thank you!
 
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Ambo123 said...
May 31, 2010 at 12:22 am:

This is really inspiring to me, and it's exactly how I feel about the relationship I am in right now.

Thank you for writing this.

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 11:08 am :
I am so glad it inspired you...I hope your relationship either gets better...or you find your way out of it...no one deserves to be trapped behind a mask...blossom into the beautiful creation that you are:)
 
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princess4ever said...
May 1, 2010 at 1:02 pm:
man!!!!!! this poem is great. whats meant by" you made my like seem right"?
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
May 11, 2010 at 3:12 pm :
it's meant to say life...lol oops!
 
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wazowski said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 9:47 am:
this was a really good poem .. i liked it :)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 3:29 pm :
Thank u so much:) lol i like it too!
 
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leejeanstar said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 6:10 pm:
your poems are fantastic! they flow so well. your one of the best poets ive ever read.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:10 pm :
Oh wow thank you so much:)
U've jut made my day!
I'm sure ur fantastic too
I'll check out some of ur work!
 
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luvinlife519 said...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 7:06 pm:
i agree, so many people are like this. people really do lose themselves for someone else. great job writing this. read and comment on mine?
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 12:06 pm :
Yep it's a vry sad nut vry true cycle that many girls go through:(
But ya i'll def check out ur stuff;)
 
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annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 9:03 am:
Aw, this is so beautiful.
I'm pretty ashamed to say that so much of this sounds so familiar to me and is 100% relatable.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 12:05 pm :
Well Thank you:)
n don't be ashamed...I obviously felt this way once or I wouldn't have wrote this poem...so as long as you free yourself from who you are wrapped around and become the true you there's no shame in that:)
 
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BrittneyLynn said...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 2:46 pm:
I agree you shouldn't have to change who you are for the person that you love.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 12, 2010 at 9:50 am :
too many people do and you shouldn't lose yourself while trying to find love
 
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kiwi12 said...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 3:02 pm:
oh my goodness this flows so well, i love it. and it really describes what you're describing.... fantastic job.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 2, 2010 at 11:25 am :
Thank you so much:)
I love knowing pple can understand n feel the eomtion in my poems:)
 
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Babydoll said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 12:34 pm:
I think it really tells some one the issues teens go through. thank you for being brave enough to write about it. you should check out some of my work
 
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