Lost in Love

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


When I look into the mirror,
The reflection I see is you.
I no longer recognize myself,
I wish that wasn't true.
Everyday I'm pretending,
I'm disguised with lies.
You are my new identity,
You're the soul behind my eyes.
The only thing I can hear,
Is your voice inside my head.
Where have I gone,
The real me seems dead.
I don't remember who I was,
You have been me for so long.
You made my like seem right,
When everything appeared wrong.
I am captive in your love,
In your chains I am bound.
I'm searching for myself.
The true me needs to be found.


The author's comments:
I hope people will learn to always be true to themself and not to conform to fit someone else's mold because who they are is perfect and doesn't need to be altered to make someone happy. Remember, you were born an original so why die a copy?

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on Dec. 11 2010 at 9:23 am
bresweeti SILVER, Belleville, Michigan
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wow this is really good! , i can realy compare myself to it

awsome job !


on Nov. 22 2010 at 2:20 pm
Inlove4ever BRONZE, Haddenham, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I have loved you forever and forever will!

omg! amazing!

i love this poem because it's me really, thats how my life is, i love this boy and my hole life is turned into me jst wantin him and my old self has jst gone, faded out


ellie75 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 28 2010 at 3:07 pm
ellie75 BRONZE, Nunica, Michigan
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This is an amazing poem!

It's so true, and easy to relate to.

fantastic job!


on Sep. 14 2010 at 12:57 pm
Faith.Hope.Love BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"To succeed in life, you need three things: a wishbone, a backbone and a funnybone."
Reba McEntire

I absolutely agree with your author's comment! Great job on the sonnet! *two thumbs up*

on Sep. 14 2010 at 10:10 am
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number

wow what a great poem! i loved it. you are such a great writter. i love the flow of it. keep it up :)

on Jul. 15 2010 at 9:22 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Oh thank you:) n don't be jealous I'm sure ur an amazing writer also!;)

on Jul. 10 2010 at 2:49 pm
CyndiDarling. BRONZE, Madera, California
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Favorite Quote:
'If Your Not Afraid To Die, You Aren't Afraid Of Anything' -Cyndi(:

You Are Very Talented(:. I'm Jealous xD.

on Jun. 21 2010 at 11:35 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you! thank you! thank you!

on Jun. 18 2010 at 11:29 am
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

OMG ! OMG ! OMG ! This is AMAZING ! iLove it 

That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u


on Jun. 2 2010 at 11:08 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I am so glad it inspired you...I hope your relationship either gets better...or you find your way out of it...no one deserves to be trapped behind a mask...blossom into the beautiful creation that you are:)

Ambo123 BRONZE said...
on May. 31 2010 at 12:22 am
Ambo123 BRONZE, Hillsboro, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Two musicians playing together, there is nothing more beautiful.
-John Frusicante

This is really inspiring to me, and it's exactly how I feel about the relationship I am in right now.

Thank you for writing this.


on May. 11 2010 at 3:12 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

it's meant to say life...lol oops!

on May. 1 2010 at 1:02 pm
princess4ever BRONZE, Tripoli, Other
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man!!!!!! this poem is great. whats meant by" you made my like seem right"?

on Apr. 30 2010 at 3:29 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u so much:) lol i like it too!

wazowski said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 9:47 am
wazowski, Saugus, Massachusetts
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this was a really good poem .. i liked it :)

on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:10 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Oh wow thank you so much:)

U've jut made my day!

I'm sure ur fantastic too

I'll check out some of ur work!

justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 6:10 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"You live but once, you might as well be amusing." -Coco Chanel
"Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't." -Richard Bach
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." -Einstein

your poems are fantastic! they flow so well. your one of the best poets ive ever read.

on Feb. 3 2010 at 12:06 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Yep it's a vry sad nut vry true cycle that many girls go through:(

But ya i'll def check out ur stuff;)

on Feb. 3 2010 at 12:05 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Well Thank you:)

n don't be ashamed...I obviously felt this way once or I wouldn't have wrote this poem...so as long as you free yourself from who you are wrapped around and become the true you there's no shame in that:)

on Feb. 2 2010 at 7:06 pm
luvinlife519 SILVER, Wilson, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your sidewalk is your runway"

i agree, so many people are like this. people really do lose themselves for someone else. great job writing this. read and comment on mine?


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