Lost in Love

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


When I look into the mirror,
The reflection I see is you.
I no longer recognize myself,
I wish that wasn't true.
Everyday I'm pretending,
I'm disguised with lies.
You are my new identity,
You're the soul behind my eyes.
The only thing I can hear,
Is your voice inside my head.
Where have I gone,
The real me seems dead.
I don't remember who I was,
You have been me for so long.
You made my like seem right,
When everything appeared wrong.
I am captive in your love,
In your chains I am bound.
I'm searching for myself.
The true me needs to be found.


The author's comments:
I hope people will learn to always be true to themself and not to conform to fit someone else's mold because who they are is perfect and doesn't need to be altered to make someone happy. Remember, you were born an original so why die a copy?

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on Dec. 8 2016 at 1:45 pm
Jenifer_cornejo SILVER, Sacramento, California
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this is so heart breaking and such an inspirational poem. I love how you describe how this person makes you feel,see and think.

on Nov. 11 2015 at 2:29 pm
Dameon_Farris PLATINUM, Folton, District Of Columbia
20 articles 2 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everybody is a genius. But if you judge a fish on its ability to climb a tree. It will live its whole life believing that it is stupid." - Albert Eistiene

Great job it's pretty good il admit it made me inspired XD

on Mar. 2 2015 at 8:40 pm
Serena102101 BRONZE, Hartland, Wisconsin
4 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
You put the killing thing in your mouth, but never give it the power to kill you
-The Fault In Our Stars

This is a great poem and I have never read such a poem like this. Great work and keep posting on this sight

on Nov. 14 2014 at 1:55 pm
Sarelle PLATINUM, Winslow, Maine
21 articles 3 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream like you will live forever,
Live like you will die tomorrow.

Wow. This was amazing! One of the most inspirational poems I have read in a long time. Great job!

on Sep. 27 2014 at 8:28 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

This is so beautiful! It's sad and heartbreaking but so deeo and meaningful. I can so easily relate to it cuz i remember I've been pretending to be someone I'm not just so I can fit in and be appreciated and noticed. But thank god now I realize how wrong I was, that being myself is enough. I learned to say :"Either accept me this way or go look the other way" Great job, keep itup and thanks for sharing this

on Nov. 5 2013 at 12:12 pm
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
14 articles 1 photo 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And its better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, I'm already better than them."

Amazing.. nothing to say but wow.

on Oct. 23 2012 at 3:40 pm
angel_of_silence PLATINUM, Cotulla, Texas
24 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The boy never cried again, and he never forgot what he'd learned: that to love is to destroy, and that to be loved is to be the one destroyed.” -Jace Wayland City of Bones

This is a very great poem, it is very deep and it really speaks.

Lauren T. said...
on May. 1 2012 at 7:44 am
Your poem was really deep in thought, and had really good rhyming to it. When I read your poem I found that it was a sonnet poem. I also found some assonance used in some of the ending words of a verse.

on Apr. 8 2012 at 7:52 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
"it's impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default."
-J.K.Rowling

Beautiful...

on Feb. 2 2012 at 4:42 pm
John Frechette, Holden, Massachusetts
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Wicked good, great rhymes

Kayte BRONZE said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 3:26 pm
Kayte BRONZE, Sandy, Utah
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let no one ever come to you without leaving better and happier. Be the living expression of God's kindness: kindness in your face, kindness in your eyes, kindness in your smile."
-Mother Teresa

Amazing!! Perfect for my life right this very second. Thank you!!

on Oct. 15 2011 at 1:01 pm
musiccrazy SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
8 articles 1 photo 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live a life worth living, because God gave you this amazing gift worth giving!" by me (Harley)

Out of ten I give it a 1000! That was really good.

on Sep. 23 2011 at 10:52 am
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
24 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

this is reallly flipping good:D!

gave it a 5/5 (:


on Sep. 23 2011 at 12:38 am
christine15 BRONZE, None, Other
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
True love waits but lust dont

wow! it's nice huh! I love it! You're a good poet! Nice job! keep it up!

on Jun. 27 2011 at 11:00 am
ink_siren BRONZE, Hopewell, Virginia
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity."
— Edgar Allan Poe

You embody individualism so well. I see this happening to so many people and I am so glad that you wrote about it. Keep writing! You make me jealous. :) Hope to be as agood as you one day!

kellie 101 said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 7:59 am
Beautifull <3 :D

on May. 20 2011 at 10:00 am
DarkAngelNinjaXP, Madison, Virginia
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
When dancing with Death, don't trip.

This was great and so true with a lot of couples.

BeingAnna GOLD said...
on May. 4 2011 at 8:53 pm
BeingAnna GOLD, Montreal, Other
13 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imperfection is beauty
-Marilyn Monroe

so pretty and touching

good job :)


on Mar. 31 2011 at 7:03 pm
EmilyEatIt BRONZE, Harrisburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
gawsh there's so many amazing ones i just can't choose!

that's goreous! ♥♥♥♥

on Dec. 11 2010 at 9:41 am
Crazymexican GOLD, Jay, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
not sure

awesome poem!! keep it up


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