You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:45 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Well thank u:) 

lol I've never had anyone tell me my poem was hot before so thanx


on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:44 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u;) n I'll def check out ur work;);)

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:43 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx:)

Well deff let me kno when it goes through cuz I totally wana read it;)


on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:42 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u vry much

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:42 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I do too lol n thank u:)

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:42 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u so much:)

on Apr. 13 2010 at 1:24 pm
lachicamascool BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To act or not to act... what a stupid question!"

Really good! It makes me want to cry.

 


pg13 said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 3:23 pm
Great poem, but, how is this a sonnet?

on Apr. 12 2010 at 6:48 am
mandys.shamless SILVER, Reno, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
It's not really a quote from me but it's the words i live by...Never regret something because at one point it was exactaly what you wanted....Live it up drink it down party hard.....Never say goodbye
because goodbye means going away
and going away

Soooo! Wonderful..words can not describe!

on Apr. 9 2010 at 10:54 am
s.nichole. PLATINUM, Ossian, Indiana
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wow.

on Apr. 7 2010 at 9:10 pm
Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be hated for who i am, than loved for who I'm not~Anonymous

No individual has any right to come into and out of this world without leaving distinct and legit reasons for having passed through.~Anonymous

I really like this. it explains so much.  i've watched close friends change throughout the years, for better or for worse. and sometimes it's sad to see them turn in a different direction than you. that you SO much for this. it means alot :) keep writing

lnvo97 GOLD said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 5:37 pm
lnvo97 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
But I say unto you, Love your enemies, bless them that curse you, do good to them that hate you, and pray for them which despitefully use you, and persecute you;
Matthew 5:44

this is amazing!!!

berry said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 3:35 pm
hey this is hot keep up the good work

on Apr. 7 2010 at 12:54 pm
Ghada.Q. SILVER, Lahore, Other
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

This is sooo sweet. It'd be a great song too!

Do check out my work too if you can :)


Metree SILVER said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 11:33 am
Metree SILVER, Machipongo, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 20 comments
wow i love this! I'm trying to get one published called Brick Wall that I submitted about a week and a half ago that hasn't passed through the editors yet that is JUST like this and I know exactly how you must feel because the same thing happened with one of my really close friends and she's totally not the same person anymore

on Apr. 6 2010 at 1:48 pm
Breezy41 BRONZE, West Plains, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never let yesterday's dissapointments overtake tomorrow's dreams."

Wow! This is amazing! Keep up the good work! (:

on Apr. 5 2010 at 2:41 pm
MedievalMouse94 SILVER, Toms River, New Jersey
8 articles 3 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A broken heart may heal with time, but even the smallest of wounds leaves a scar."

I love it!

Jacee007 GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 1:09 pm
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
13 articles 6 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Today is the Tomorrow you were worrying about Yesterday. The journey of a lifetime begins with one single step. Negativity is the downfall of dreams. It's not the quantity of friends that matters it's the quality.

Wow what talent:)

No matter how many times I read this poem it never gets old!

I love it


on Apr. 2 2010 at 4:40 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

dude thanx!!!! =D

on Apr. 2 2010 at 4:40 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx a bunch!

Ya I'll totally read n comment on ur work;)



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