You & Me

I have already commented on this before but i love it so much haha. I can relate to it a lot because i used to have a friend and he changed but i never did.

i felt the same way too about my so called _best friend_ this...

i totally get what u r going through

+great poem

I've felt the same way about my so-called best friend. I can connect to each line in your poem... Absolutely good. 

I love this poem so much i'm gonna tattoo this on my wrist for sure.

This is extraordinary, it touched me. 

This is really amazing. It touched me.

I think it was a great poem. You used a great simile comparing how he changed to how the leaves fall off a tree. Also I could hear the Rhythm of the poem. It was a great poem.

I liked this poem because it had good rhythm and flowed well.

I also liked it because it had personification

Somehow I feel this piece was written for me. I so can relate, I mean really relate to what you wrote. So true too, I love it.

This is such a truthful poem.  You conveyed your idea well and I can relate to this so much! Awesome job! This is going to my favorites!

I can really relate to this. I really hate when that happens, especially when it's happening right before your eyes and you can't do anything to stop it.

most truthful poem ive seen inna min

Very well doneand easily relateable, good work

I can relate to this poem so much. One of my best friends has changed so much, I don't even think we relate anymore. 

Great poem!

I dislike it when my friends change for the worse. ]: Totally relatable sonnet! Nice job!

Whats good about this poem is that it will always be true, like much of Shakespeare's work. Although like his, it's not in Shakespearean Sonnet form, or any other form I am aware of. With that said, I think this poem is great and the rhyming that it does have is perfect. Personally, I am not a fan of poems that every line rhymes somewhere; I like ones where there is a little rhyme here and there, giving it a definite song sense. Overalll, a job well done.

This poem was really good and I feel relevant as well. I really do feel as if it describes my relationship with some people. Really Good :)

Hey, This is really good this is my first time on the site and I already see awesome things you have a talent!! Cherish it

This is a great poem and I can definitely relate :) Would you mind reading my poem A Pink Watch, Portal, and Perpetual Sea?

This poem is amazing. I can definitely relate. I'd love it if you could check out some of my poems and leave a comment and rating. I really like the way you write.

Loved this poem, I tagged it as a favorite :) I can totally relate to the topic, my poems are very similar to this one.

I did enjoy it Blue, I really enjoyed the rhyming and the read !!!

I love this poem! It's very easy to relate to.

love it!! keep up the good work!

Love it!What a great poem!

This is great, but the structure is wrong for a sonnet. I love the message, though.

I love this! It is so profound and relatable! I know exactly what you are talking about!

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I know exactly what you mean. With my exboyfriend, and my best friend it's exactly the same way. I can't stand it, and it makes me sad. It makes me remember the really good days we had together and how they used to act. I wish they still acted that way. I wish they were still the people I knew and loved.

This is a wonderful poem. I agree with wat you are saying but i also take from it something else. I am also seeing it not as a friend, but like if you had an old boyfriend or girlfriend, and things have changed. THank you!

:)

I can totally relate to this. It's the same case as going back to school after summer's over and your friends act like they don't even know you ar want to be near you anymore. Great piece of work! Keep on writing!

This poem is great ! The emotion it evokes is very easy to relate to. Such a short lenghted poem telling such a long story. I like this poem alot.

I can totally relate to this poem...it's a great poem

This is a wonderful poem. I really like the emotion in it. This is a very relatable poem. Good job!

A very beautiful poem indeed~ Your writing style reminds me of my own in that I like to finish with the beggining. Very strong, very deep. May that person inspire you to create another poem -one where the good times of the past reappear and find a permanent place in the present-

~RedDaisy~

Simple, yet says a lot! :)

WOW!!! That is soo true.. 

 

Absolutely beautiful!!

Wow... I really like this. Love the tie back to the beginning! Keep writing! :)

This is a very well done poem, it is truly beautiful :) Congrats on writing a brilliant poem. Please check out some of my work if you can, i would like some feedback! :D Keep up the writing

Amazin!

 

This was great, you put so much feeling into a short amount of space. Impressive!

This is an amazing poem. Sonnets are my favorite. I love how this can relate to anyone and everyone and says so much in only a few lines. AMAZING <3

good poem! But it's not in sonnet form...

sonnets are written 10 sylables by 10 lines in this rime order:

a

b

a

b

c

d

c

d

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I really did enjoy it, thank you. It relates to just about everyone, the main idea of it and all. It was extremely well-worded, the rhythm was all together, and the whole feel of it all captivates the reader. I guess you could say that it emanates good vibes. ;)

Very Good!!!! I love it!!!! :D

 

I cannot put words to how accurately this represents how I have felt, and still feel. So I will leave it at an enthusiatic 'well done'.

~Jinx <3

I totally agree. I have seen alot of this happening.

This is very good:)