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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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r.afiah said...
today at 8:08 am
Most relatable thing I've read all week!!
 
DelightfulDysfunction said...
Feb. 16 at 9:39 am
I can totally relate to this poem...Love it.
 
Bunny137 said...
Jan. 26 at 6:08 pm
I love this poem so much keep writing.
 
SammyLuvz said...
Jan. 11 at 7:20 pm
Sorry change my screen name
 
SammyLuv said...
Jan. 10 at 6:25 pm
Love poem write more
 
Sofia_Gonz07This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 6, 2016 at 10:00 am
You write so good, don't stop :)
 
SammyLuv replied...
Jan. 10 at 5:53 pm
I agree!! Love it ;)
 
JustinCJoiner said...
Dec. 6, 2016 at 9:35 am
This is so strong. Great Job!
 
Sofia_Gonz07This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 6, 2016 at 10:01 am
I agree with you
 
love_obssesed said...
Dec. 1, 2016 at 10:11 am
there is nothing more painful than being in love with a person, that even though you know you'd still love them no matter how drastically they changed, you miss what they used to be.
 
gothicangel said...
Nov. 28, 2016 at 4:25 pm
This poem speaks to me it weighs heavy upon my heart i have so many people i once knew who are no longer the person i used to know or talk to
 
The_Unnoticed_OneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 24, 2016 at 4:19 pm
This poem expresses a multitude of emotions. I feel as if there probably isn't a person who can't somehow relate to this in some way. I genuinely enjoyed reading this.
 
brightblue2316 said...
Nov. 16, 2016 at 9:57 am
This is such a beautiful poem!
 
TheWisp said...
Nov. 12, 2016 at 12:55 pm
Old friend, ex-lover, lost family member... so many applications for the emotions in this. I'm so jealous of how you managed to concisely convey all of that. Great poem.
 
bpprince said...
Nov. 10, 2016 at 12:44 am
This poem great i can totally relate to it
 
TheFlashNatalie said...
Nov. 7, 2016 at 10:41 am
Wow this is an amazing poem. I love it so much. Thanks for making this it has touched my heart.
 
inutu said...
Oct. 15, 2016 at 4:14 pm
I love this poem it best explains how I currently feel about my old friend its perfect
 
uhhregan said...
Sept. 28, 2016 at 10:18 am
I love this especially since fall is just starting, this poem has perfect timing.
 
RyeaAlexisYoung said...
Aug. 12, 2016 at 10:45 am
I LOVE this!!! Great job!
 
kiwi-dictatorship said...
Jul. 27, 2016 at 10:13 pm
I love this poem!
 
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