You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.

The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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on Jul. 8 at 1:10 pm
Ravensandfire SILVER, San Francisco, California
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Love this so much :D

on May. 16 at 3:41 pm
his.babe.5.15.18 BRONZE, Alvin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Scars are meant to be battle wounds, not peautiful pictures

this is really good it reminded me of an old friend of mine that isn't my friend anymore

RujuS GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 at 5:09 pm
RujuS GOLD, Sugar Land, Texas
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Wow.....This is so relatable.

on Mar. 5 at 1:04 pm
Kyleah0906 BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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Favorite Quote:
"your not uGLy society is" -unkown

The sad truth of life

on Feb. 23 at 6:29 pm
isabellaaaaaaaaaaa, Collingswood, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:

My teacher made us write a paragraph about what this poem meant to us.

wow ............

i love this !

on Jan. 4 at 12:37 pm
Julianna.S GOLD, Tirana, Other
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Very well written piece! I look forward to more work from you. Pls return the favour and check my work out when you get a chance! XOXO

so good .......

Amazing poem. I relate so much

Fantastic poem,very nice

on Dec. 10 2017 at 2:24 am
InkStainedFingertips, Belfast, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A bird sitting on a tree is never afraid of the branch breaking, because her trust is not in the branch but on it's own wings," - Unknown.

I love your writing style and I can really relate to this at the minute.

olala said...
on Nov. 28 2017 at 3:24 pm
olala, Baytown, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
I love me

eyes cant sparkle

olala said...
on Nov. 28 2017 at 3:23 pm
olala, Baytown, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
I love me

don't worry about other people

Mickeyyy said...
on Nov. 6 2017 at 9:42 am
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Amazing poem. I relate so much to this.

Princess boo said...
on Nov. 1 2017 at 6:20 pm
It inspires me

on Oct. 17 2017 at 2:18 pm
Breezette DIAMOND, Uniontown, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Every Time I even think of you, all those bad memories just fade away, 'cause your smile's enough, you're enough...

I no joke am about to cry. Like UGHHHh

NJacobY SILVER said...
on Apr. 7 2017 at 4:56 pm
NJacobY SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

Had the same experience multiple times.

on Apr. 4 2017 at 9:39 pm
manasisoman SILVER, Hillsborough, New Jersey
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This is written so well! Keep up the good work!

torito said...
on Apr. 3 2017 at 12:18 pm
Can anyone please write me sonnet poem I'm having a really hard time with it

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