You & Me

October 8, 2009
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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.





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Lily">This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 2:38 am
wow ............
 
Lily">This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 8 at 2:00 am
i love this !
 
Julianna.SThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4 at 12:37 pm
Very well written piece! I look forward to more work from you. Pls return the favour and check my work out when you get a chance! XOXO
 
B">This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 14, 2017 at 3:16 am
so good .......
 
C">This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 11, 2017 at 6:03 am
Amazing poem. I relate so much
 
Bus3">This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 11, 2017 at 4:24 am
Fantastic poem,very nice
 
YoungVoiceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 10, 2017 at 2:24 am
I love your writing style and I can really relate to this at the minute.
 
olala said...
Nov. 28, 2017 at 3:24 pm
eyes cant sparkle
 
olala said...
Nov. 28, 2017 at 3:23 pm
don't worry about other people
 
Mickeyyy said...
Nov. 6, 2017 at 9:42 am
Amazing poem. I relate so much to this.
 
Princess boo said...
Nov. 1, 2017 at 6:20 pm
It inspires me
 
BreezetteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 17, 2017 at 2:18 pm
I no joke am about to cry. Like UGHHHh
 
NJacobY said...
Apr. 7, 2017 at 4:56 pm
Had the same experience multiple times.
 
manasisoman said...
Apr. 4, 2017 at 9:39 pm
This is written so well! Keep up the good work!
 
torito said...
Apr. 3, 2017 at 12:18 pm
Can anyone please write me sonnet poem I'm having a really hard time with it
 
EvalynnHeather said...
Mar. 17, 2017 at 9:20 am
This is so good!!
 
r.afiah said...
Feb. 22, 2017 at 8:08 am
Most relatable thing I've read all week!!
 
DelightfulDysfunction said...
Feb. 16, 2017 at 9:39 am
I can totally relate to this poem...Love it.
 
Bunny137 said...
Jan. 26, 2017 at 6:08 pm
I love this poem so much keep writing.
 
SammyLuvz said...
Jan. 11, 2017 at 7:20 pm
Sorry change my screen name
 
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