You & Me

October 8, 2009
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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.





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B">This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:16 am
so good .......
 
C">This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 11 at 6:03 am
Amazing poem. I relate so much
 
Bus3">This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 11 at 4:24 am
Fantastic poem,very nice
 
YoungVoiceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 10 at 2:24 am
I love your writing style and I can really relate to this at the minute.
 
olala said...
Nov. 28 at 3:24 pm
eyes cant sparkle
 
olala said...
Nov. 28 at 3:23 pm
don't worry about other people
 
Mickeyyy said...
Nov. 6 at 9:42 am
Amazing poem. I relate so much to this.
 
Princess boo said...
Nov. 1 at 6:20 pm
It inspires me
 
BreezetteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 17 at 2:18 pm
I no joke am about to cry. Like UGHHHh
 
NJacobY said...
Apr. 7 at 4:56 pm
Had the same experience multiple times.
 
manasisoman said...
Apr. 4 at 9:39 pm
This is written so well! Keep up the good work!
 
torito said...
Apr. 3 at 12:18 pm
Can anyone please write me sonnet poem I'm having a really hard time with it
 
EvalynnHeather said...
Mar. 17 at 9:20 am
This is so good!!
 
r.afiahThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 22 at 8:08 am
Most relatable thing I've read all week!!
 
DelightfulDysfunction said...
Feb. 16 at 9:39 am
I can totally relate to this poem...Love it.
 
Bunny137 said...
Jan. 26 at 6:08 pm
I love this poem so much keep writing.
 
SammyLuvz said...
Jan. 11 at 7:20 pm
Sorry change my screen name
 
SammyLuv said...
Jan. 10 at 6:25 pm
Love poem write more
 
Sofia_Gonz07This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 6, 2016 at 10:00 am
You write so good, don't stop :)
 
SammyLuv replied...
Jan. 10 at 5:53 pm
I agree!! Love it ;)
 
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