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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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on May. 24 2010 at 4:57 pm
avidDreamwriter BRONZE, Ridgeville, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all those who wander are lost"- J.R.R. Tolkein's Lord of The Rings

you may love snookums, but you don't have to try and treat the comments like it's a dating site.....

-.-


Madelaine208 said...
on May. 24 2010 at 3:23 pm
Madelaine208, Sidney, Ohio
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I LOVE YOU SNOOKUMS!

kristinaaa said...
on May. 24 2010 at 12:16 pm
kristinaaa, Saugus, Massachusetts
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This is a really good poem

Snookums said...
on May. 24 2010 at 7:48 am
Snookums, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Call Me for a good time"
"Get in meh belly"

you like meh?

on May. 22 2010 at 11:25 am
docta_rini SILVER, Detroit, Michigan
6 articles 3 photos 10 comments
i just noticed ur frm michigan...i am too

on May. 22 2010 at 11:24 am
docta_rini SILVER, Detroit, Michigan
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I think the idea ur writin abt is great... ppl do change...it's annoyin when one year someone is ur "best friend" n the next their fake as the jewelry they are wearing:(

on May. 21 2010 at 9:31 pm
avidDreamwriter BRONZE, Ridgeville, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all those who wander are lost"- J.R.R. Tolkein's Lord of The Rings

I wasn't trying to be funny. Ever heard of the word wit?

on May. 21 2010 at 7:36 pm
splenda. SILVER, Century, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fiction is obliged to stick to possibilities. Truth isn't." Mark Twain

haha. lollipop is my best friend  we both ze you.

Snookums said...
on May. 21 2010 at 7:24 pm
Snookums, Boston, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Call Me for a good time"
"Get in meh belly"

omg! dont be hating on u & meh.

its a lovely poem.

id appreciate if you wouldn't do that.


Snookums said...
on May. 21 2010 at 7:20 pm
Snookums, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Call Me for a good time"
"Get in meh belly"

why thank you splenda :)

on May. 21 2010 at 6:44 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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I'm talking about Ummmm and Dreamer of Dreams... Don't let them get you down. 

on May. 21 2010 at 6:43 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Excuse me, dear sir, I'd like to see you do better. What I'd also like you to do is shut your mouth.

I thought it was totally and completley  AMAZING. perfect. Ahh... perfecto.

I'd like to see you do better.


Snookums said...
on May. 21 2010 at 2:15 pm
Snookums, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Call Me for a good time"
"Get in meh belly"

thank you for your kindness, and your right always listen to the dreamer of dreams.

Snookums said...
on May. 21 2010 at 2:15 pm
Snookums, Boston, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Call Me for a good time"
"Get in meh belly"

dont be dissin on YOU & ME.

its a lovely poem, and are you trying to be funny, heh thats meh job, not yours.

thanks.


Snookums said...
on May. 21 2010 at 2:14 pm
Snookums, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Call Me for a good time"
"Get in meh belly"

i think i may be in love with you too lollipop <3

on May. 21 2010 at 1:52 pm
misswindsor BRONZE, Collingdale, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What Fresh Hell is this?"

WOW I love this poem keep writing and don't listen to dreamer of dreams

on May. 21 2010 at 1:06 pm
avidDreamwriter BRONZE, Ridgeville, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all those who wander are lost"- J.R.R. Tolkein's Lord of The Rings

We thinks you put the wrong emPHASIS on the wrong syLLABBLE.

on May. 21 2010 at 12:58 pm
ISpeakForMyself BRONZE, Garland, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is giving the power to brake your heart.
but trusting them no to.</3

-dont knowwww,? /:

That's good oneee(:

on May. 21 2010 at 12:39 pm
avidDreamwriter BRONZE, Ridgeville, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all those who wander are lost"- J.R.R. Tolkein's Lord of The Rings

Clearly the comments regarding this poem demonstrate your ability to captivate an audience. I threw up.

on May. 21 2010 at 12:38 pm
avidDreamwriter BRONZE, Ridgeville, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all those who wander are lost"- J.R.R. Tolkein's Lord of The Rings

A
B
C
B

There's probably a reason
they haven't seen you/
since last September
There's something about you they/
don't want to remember.

I'm done.