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A two way mirror

sunlight fades,
Shadows grow,
I cant hold out,
i know you know,
But, if i cant hold out,
what will i do,
i dont want to be here,
not with you,
So why did i come,
ill never know,
but how you make me feel,
I guess it shows,
the way you look at me,
the way i look at you,
why cant we just be together,
just one not two?
But the way you lead me on,
it shows in your eyes now,
the way you look through me,
i guess u never really knew me,
cause as i turn around,
and walk through that door,
you look through me, not at me,
But, thorugh me Once more.




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SierraWilkerson said...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 5:27 pm:
amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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Oliviaw said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 7:26 pm:
Very creative. How can you guys write poems during school? I can not write something when one million people are talking. I have to have complete silence.
 
Ashlie94 replied...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 2:44 pm :
Lol idk just somethin ive learned to do.. its rare that i have complete silence.. so i got used to tuning people out i guess. lol
 
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bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 11:11 am:
I like it...it has a vry nice flow...lol i write a lot of my poems during school too...oh n thanx for commenting on my poem...i appreciate it
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 1:46 pm:
this is really good :) i know the feeling. i like how you expressed that into your poem; i felt all the emotion. great job :) check out some of my newest work if you could, i would love your feedback.
 
Ashlie94 replied...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 3:00 pm :
thank you for the comment. I'll definitely check out your work.
-Ash
 
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