September 28, 2009
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I’m feeling like I’m wishing
Like a part of me is breaking
like a change is quickly coming
like my hands will not stop shaking

I’m feeling like its hard
And its not worth all this pain
I’m feeling like I need to cry
I wish that it would rain.

I can’t say what I’m feeling
I’m not quite sure what’s wrong
I need to start the healing
Play this sweet sad song

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Caramel_Shades said...
Aug. 23, 2014 at 2:09 pm
love it!!! check out some of my work i'd love to get feedback from an amazing writer like you. I'm still learning and new- Kisses
Imari R. said...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 6:24 pm
Oh this is really good!! Great job keep up the great work!
EllieHeart said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 9:25 am
I loved this poem! Could really feel the emotion. Can you take a look at my poem Siren Lies and comment? Thanks!
Avalon,Liv said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 12:03 am
i seriously love this peom so much...<3
Blah_blah_blah said...
Nov. 19, 2011 at 5:48 pm
Poem is great!! I loved it...but you forgot the cuplet at the end of a sonnet <3 loved it n e ways
LiveLoveAnna said...
May 4, 2011 at 8:52 pm
For some reason this made me want to cry. I can really connect with the emotion in this poem and I think it's soo touching. I feel like I wrote this, like you know exactly how I feel. It's amazing!
LoveDeep said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 8:21 pm
Great poem, it made me wanna go grab a pen and paper.
lambthing said...
Feb. 6, 2011 at 11:24 pm
I love it; this is so simple, so pretty, and yes, it DOES have a lovely ring to it; excellent. (:
SierraWilkerson said...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 5:32 pm
i could feel your emotion in it.  i love it :)
jasmin101 said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 6:10 am

didnt use that much of complex words

and thats exactly why i like it

hey try seeing my stuff

hope u like them too!!!

OriginalCarbonation said...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 4:15 pm
wow, this is very good. it covers the general idea of the emotion. its perfect. i really love it <3
taytaynichole said...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 8:56 pm
this was realy good. you gots some talent.. relatable
Lester_34 said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 11:35 pm
this is a great one!!
nickykens This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 7:14 pm
That does have a nice ring, and I can really relate to it.  Good job.
ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 2:58 pm

That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u

cwayho said...
May 18, 2010 at 9:55 pm

excellent pulse

the lines and expressions of your feelings, however, were somewhat simple, dull, and lacked poetic weight and effect

Priskilla said...
May 12, 2010 at 10:43 am
This is nice ... And YES it does have a good flow to it
Nicole.Jones said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 3:59 pm
this is really nice, it does have a nice flow to it.
steff123456789 said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 10:38 am
yo grlllll i be likinnnn this but it was kinda short i wasnt ready6 for it to end you 9knowwwwwww i l6uh9hhhhh you
Jacee007 said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 1:44 pm
Wow what a beautiful poem!
So well written!
Can you check out some of my poems plz;)
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