Take me

September 28, 2009
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Take my life
It's your life too
I gave it up
so I got you

Take my hand
You'll take my heart
don't let it go
I'll come apart

and once my seems
begin to rip
you will forget me

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Fia-fia said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 11:20 am

this is a wonderful little poem... thank you!


dark_armor1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:16 am
omg so i am a HUGE elvis fan ! i loved it! job well done .
croww said...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 2:14 pm
loved it!!
ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 8:34 pm
This is so good :) I love it , shows a very good talent . please check out my work :)
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 11:57 am
this is great! although its short i think it has such deep and sweet meaning :) the rhythm is great and i love all the content in the piece :) i all around love it. check out some of my work if you could, i would love your opinion. 5 stars ;)
hannahbee7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 27, 2009 at 5:30 pm
Thanks i'll defiantly check out you're work too:]
Lixxy_93 said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 10:25 pm
amazing! i love this :]
bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 12:35 pm
i like it lol but i like elvis too ;)
blonde4life1101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 12:07 pm
Good poem, just one thing, it should be seams, not seems
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