Crash (Goodbye)

September 26, 2009
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Why can't you just see,
That the difference is me?
That step you're so willing to take,
The last one might have come too late.
I see you, wish upon a star,
You don't know how lucky you are,
I'm looking for you near, searching far,
I look to the sky and see my star.

Why can't you just see,
All that you've ever wanted from me?
I wish I could say the same for you,
Same size, different shoe.
I'm not burning up, but I'm ready crash,
Extract my death wish from the ash,
You knew this could never last,
Speeding along, gone in a flash.

Why can't you just see?
The world is structured so rigidly.
No room: if it's bent,
It'll break, time well spent.
Hesitates, then falls in descent,
Irreparable; time well spent.
Time well spent living a lie.
Now all that's left to say (goodbye)

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mitguy said...
May 15, 2012 at 10:41 am
I loved this sonnet. It was really deep. It had really good rhythm. I hope you make more poems.
HazyeyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 17, 2012 at 9:45 pm
WOW!! i love this work! ps. would u and anyone else willing read, rate, comment on my poem Black Fire? please, it would meen a lot! thx in advance for coming possibility
EllieHeart said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 5:46 pm
Really strong! Beautiful! Can you check out my poem Siren Lies? I'd really appreciate your feedback. Thanks!
Lexie96 said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 8:32 pm
Beautiful and incredibly powerful. If you have the time I would love to hear your opinion on my work.
horsewriter4evr said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 1:25 pm
this is so amazing! kep writing!
Wandering_Heart said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 12:10 am
loved it! your a really great writer, and your poem had a really nice flow
MomoSaysRawrr said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 7:25 pm
This was amazing. Keep writing!:)
annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 10:23 am
sketchette15 said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 5:22 pm
i like it, it gives you something to think about.
APoetAtHeart said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 7:51 am
Amazing. Very powerful
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