summer love sonnet

June 27, 2009
By Hannah caposela BRONZE, Wayne, New Jersey
Hannah caposela BRONZE, Wayne, New Jersey
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The sun like a diamond on his russet skin
The smell of his cologne carried in the breeze.
The dark mystery in his eyes so thin,
Thanking god I came to the Florida Keys.
His name is unknown to me; I have no clue.
It’s importance is little, I do not care.
His smile like porcelain as birds above flew.
But all I could see was his bronze shaggy hair.
His eyes glittered as he looked into the sun
that set atop of a painted sea.
There I was thinking he may be the one,
even though together we cannot be.
For it does no matter, we are here now.
We’ll be together someday, someway, somehow


The author's comments:
singers writes songs about the end; i write poems about the beginning.

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halley123 said...
on Mar. 20 2015 at 5:03 pm
Nice poem i see you used the abab cdcd efef gg pattern for the rhyme scheme. This is the easiest way to do it out of tye other 3 or 4 ways. Anyways congrats.

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on Feb. 23 2015 at 10:24 pm
RealRiter GOLD, Astoria, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I did not fail 101 times, but I simply found 101 ways that did not work." -Thomas Edison

ABAB,CDCD,EFEF,GG Do you know what this is? Your rhyme scheme, kind of like how I do mine. This looks more like one of my typical poem`s rhyme scheme, though: ABCB,EDFD, etc... Great job, you did well. Love your ending prose and everything up to the top. I also love the use of language and how you developed the them. Forgive me if I sound too technical, what I`m trying to say is, "You did an amazing job! Congrats":-)

on Nov. 14 2012 at 8:57 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

WOW. This poem really touched me. Wow, great job! I love your words about the poem, also. (:

on Nov. 6 2011 at 10:28 pm
Mynameislindsayy SILVER, Seattle, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather just except who I am, what's the use of trying to change?"

I love this and I love the "singers write songs about the end I write poems about the beginning" thing:)

on Jan. 2 2011 at 1:10 pm
youaretheinkandlifeisthepaper BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I want to unfold. I do not want to be folded anywhere, because there, where I am folded, I am a lie." Maggie Stiefvater

Love it. Beautiful :)

on Sep. 3 2009 at 5:18 pm
JenniferB. SILVER, Harvey, Louisiana
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I can feel this poem. I understand this situation with this person.


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