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     Little hands wave happily
Chubby cheeks drip with spit
His feet spin ’round wildly
Wheels turn enlarging his wit
Curiosity shines in his eyes
Baby babble comes out of his mouth
He stares at everything with unheard whys
Rotten smells come from down south
Light brown hair lies fuzzy
Little ears stick out
A sleepy mind leaves him muzzy
His mouth pulls into a pout
His eyes fall with heavy sleep
His tummy rises up and down
We all watch lovingly without a peep
A baby king wearing a cuteness crown


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NadimAzar. said...
Nov. 1, 2011 at 2:44 pm:
Check my page plz
 
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dark_armor1 said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 4:45 pm:
the picture has no relation watsoever with the poem which completely threw me off. but the poem itself was quiet amusing
 
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SideraCaeli said...
Nov. 3, 2010 at 10:11 pm:
It is very cute! I have nephews and nieces and, I can seriously relate! It reminded me of when they were little infants :) Beautiful
 
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gutairgirl said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 3:21 pm:
im not sure i get it. your poem is truley beautiful, but how were you feeling when you wrote it were you jealous? sad? happy?  
 
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Kaptain said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 2:48 pm:
Hey that was really cute.. I liked it :)
 
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Anima A. said...
May 17, 2010 at 8:10 pm:

dude that was truly adorable poetry congrats

 

 
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treegirl93 said...
May 7, 2010 at 2:51 pm:
The diction confused me at first. "Drip with spit", "spin wildly", "rotten smells" and then "cuteness crown." maybe if you used 'cuter' diction to describe spit etc. then the cuteness of the baby would've come through. It would've been easier to understand gow you found that cute.
 
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LuckyThree said...
May 3, 2010 at 8:31 am:
adorable poem!
 
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Hannabelle said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 4:18 pm:
I liked the peom, but the picture really threw me off.
 
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babigerl1194 said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 8:47 am:
awww is it yours or a sibling?
 
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Angel*music*lover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2009 at 5:18 pm:
:)
 
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