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By Rachel I., Dela, UT

     Little hands wave happily
Chubby cheeks drip with spit
His feet spin ’round wildly
Wheels turn enlarging his wit
Curiosity shines in his eyes
Baby babble comes out of his mouth
He stares at everything with unheard whys
Rotten smells come from down south
Light brown hair lies fuzzy
Little ears stick out
A sleepy mind leaves him muzzy
His mouth pulls into a pout
His eyes fall with heavy sleep
His tummy rises up and down
We all watch lovingly without a peep
A baby king wearing a cuteness crown




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i love this so much!

This is so true. Your great at writing. :)

on Jun. 22 2016 at 9:59 am
ripvansprinkle, West Chester, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Smash the mirrors but avoid the pieces." - B. McNally

So cute! I love the last line! If you get a chance, I would love your feedback on my sonnet "Sunburst." Keep writing though, I'd love to read more!

on Nov. 1 2011 at 2:44 pm
NadimAzar BRONZE, Beirut,
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Check my page plz

on Sep. 25 2011 at 4:45 pm
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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the picture has no relation watsoever with the poem which completely threw me off. but the poem itself was quiet amusing

on Nov. 3 2010 at 10:11 pm
SideraCaeli GOLD, Marysville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
“Be yourself. Above all, let who you are, what you are, what you believe, shine through every sentence you write, every piece you finish.” -John Jakes.

It is very cute! I have nephews and nieces and, I can seriously relate! It reminded me of when they were little infants :) Beautiful

on Aug. 3 2010 at 3:21 pm
guitargirl BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
If you dont like somthing, change it. if you cant change it, change your attitude about it.

im not sure i get it. your poem is truley beautiful, but how were you feeling when you wrote it were you jealous? sad? happy?  

Kaptain SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:48 pm
Kaptain SILVER, Dubai, Other
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Hey that was really cute.. I liked it :)

anime18 SILVER said...
on May. 17 2010 at 8:10 pm
anime18 SILVER, Brampton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake.

dude that was truly adorable poetry congrats

 


on May. 7 2010 at 2:51 pm
treegirl93 BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Be nice to trees- they'll become books someday.

The diction confused me at first. "Drip with spit", "spin wildly", "rotten smells" and then "cuteness crown." maybe if you used 'cuter' diction to describe spit etc. then the cuteness of the baby would've come through. It would've been easier to understand gow you found that cute.

LuckyThree said...
on May. 3 2010 at 8:31 am
LuckyThree, Ft.Lauderdale, Florida
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adorable poem!

on Apr. 15 2010 at 4:18 pm
Hannabelle GOLD, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"People are like slinky. They don't do much, but they are fun to push down the stairs" -Unknown

I liked the peom, but the picture really threw me off.

on Jan. 19 2010 at 8:47 am
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

awww is it yours or a sibling?

on Jul. 21 2009 at 5:18 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

:)




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