I’m better off MAG

By Ashley F., Idaho Falls, ID

     a drumming beat
rolls through her head
seems screamed aloud
but yet unsaid
she marches on
to her new song
tries to move on
she marches on
“I’m better off
better without
I’m better off
without a doubt.
It is a fact
no looking back
for what I lack
(maintain the act)”
a constant beat
tears through her head
she tries to scream
but nothing’s said
she marches on
her path is long
tears far from gone
she marches on.
“I’m better off
better without
I’m better off
without a doubt
no looking back
for what you lack
I’ll never crack
(maintain the act).”

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on Jan. 22 2010 at 6:44 am
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on Dec. 22 2009 at 6:13 pm
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deep....... i like it

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on Nov. 5 2009 at 12:09 pm
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on Oct. 8 2009 at 12:39 pm
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on Sep. 18 2009 at 10:08 pm
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