Life a mystery

March 23, 2015

Life is like a poem

We all are words in it

Problems are the gap between lines

Happiness are the gap between words

 

How sweet is our life??

How sweet a poem is??

Gladness sorrowness all are a part

What a life it is??






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ElisabethG said...
Apr. 6 at 10:09 am
Beautiful :)
 
happymoment........ replied...
Apr. 21 at 12:27 pm
thanks ElisabethG
 
LotusChild said...
May 28, 2015 at 9:28 am
Hm... This left me with mixed emotions. I enjoyed the analogy at the beginning, however... I feel that the rhythm is a bit interrupted (but that's a personal preference thing, so don't worry about it too much). I think that there's a beauty in the simplicity of this poem that is a bit more subtle than it has to be, but still it's a great piece, I enjoyed it! Make more :3
 
happymoment........ replied...
Apr. 21 at 12:27 pm
thanks LotusChild
 
Bless_survivor13 said...
May 28, 2015 at 9:11 am
this it were all your new things
 
HammadWaseemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 14, 2015 at 9:34 am
Thats wonderful! @cutedollgirl will you check and comment on my work? :) TeenInk.com/video/dancing/114206/The-Unbeatable-Breakdancer
 
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