Life a mystery

March 23, 2015
By happymoment........ BRONZE, Kerala, Other
happymoment........ BRONZE, Kerala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Always be happy"


Life is like a poem

We all are words in it

Problems are the gap between lines

Happiness are the gap between words

 

How sweet is our life??

How sweet a poem is??

Gladness sorrowness all are a part

What a life it is??


The author's comments:

This poem is written on the inspiration of my own life...


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on Apr. 21 2017 at 12:27 pm
happymoment........ BRONZE, Kerala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Always be happy"

thanks LotusChild

on Apr. 21 2017 at 12:27 pm
happymoment........ BRONZE, Kerala, Other
1 article 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always be happy"

thanks ElisabethG

on Apr. 6 2017 at 10:09 am
lizziexo BRONZE, Caen, Other
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Favorite Quote:
You've got to do the opposite of what people expect! How else do you want to surprise them?
-Victor Nikiforov from the anime Yuri On Ice

Beautiful :)

on May. 28 2015 at 9:28 am
LotusChild PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Let them hate, so long as they fear me" ~Colligula

Hm... This left me with mixed emotions. I enjoyed the analogy at the beginning, however... I feel that the rhythm is a bit interrupted (but that's a personal preference thing, so don't worry about it too much). I think that there's a beauty in the simplicity of this poem that is a bit more subtle than it has to be, but still it's a great piece, I enjoyed it! Make more :3

on May. 28 2015 at 9:11 am
Bless_survivor13 GOLD, Daytona Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The realest people dont have them many friends "
tupac

this it were all your new things

HammadWaseem said...
on May. 14 2015 at 9:34 am
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.
-Eminem

You can't see me
-John Cena

Ooh, somebody stop me!
-Mask

Thats wonderful! @cutedollgirl will you check and comment on my work? :) TeenInk.com/video/dancing/114206/The-Unbeatable-Breakdancer




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