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You didn't reply.

November 19, 2014
By HuiBen GOLD, Perak, Other
HuiBen GOLD, Perak, Other
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Hey, how are you? :)

 

Came with no reply, I thought I was about to cry.

We went to the same school for many years,

We pass by each other when we are near.

We never talked but we knew each other.

Then we graduated, and I thought I would never see you forever.

 

One day I saw you again, and I almost went insane.

There you were, looking so charming.

I gathered all my courage, the situation was so alarming.

I made up my mind and asked for your number.

You gave it to me, which I'm sure you thought didn't mean anything.

 

After some time passed, I built up my courage again,

I sent you a message asking you how you were,

I wanted to start a relationship, I thought we could be friends together.

You never replied, and I was humiliated and crushed.

It will take some time to recover, but I shouldn't feel too bad, I took a chance and pushed myself over.

 

Over my limits, over my barriers, and over my shyness,

who know with this experience, I might find someone better and has more kindess.



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on Nov. 24 2014 at 11:53 am
ShadowBlossom ELITE, Boca Raton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Memento Mori- It means that nothing lasts forever, no one is immortal, sooner or later you will die and things will come to an end. It also helps you realize that while you are living you should do the most with your life, live life to the fullest.

Your article is beautiful, sad but beautiful and you can feel the emotions of a person who was always hoping for the other's affections yet were scorned, as it is being read.  It's wonderful, thank you for posting it