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Please, please look at me

There I was, on the floor,
crossed legs, thinkin’ ‘bout you.
Your brown hair, your brown eyes,
and the way you’re never blue.
Sense of humor, perfect smile,
seem so out of reach to me.
Shy girl who you might
never ever truly meet.

Please, please, oh dear-dear, please look at me,
Why can’t I ever be person you want to see.
How come I can’t even start to talk?
You turn my tongue to chalk.

I don’t want to seem obsessive,
but you sneak into my memory.
I, want to stop, but I can’t.
It puts me in misery.
We’re out of touch,
But miss you so much.

Please, please, oh dear-dear, please look at me,
Why can’t I ever be person you want to see.
How come I can’t even start to talk?
I’m guarded behind a lock.



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Eder E. said...
Oct. 30, 2013 at 12:23 pm:
It has swag   YOLO!!!!!!!!!!!
 
The_Typewriter replied...
Jan. 10 at 7:09 pm :
Lol, thanks.
 
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Nessa13 said...
Oct. 30, 2013 at 8:22 am:
This piecwe has a lot of potintial (: I feel like if you were to go back over it and add a few things, this song could be great <3 Its good tho (: 
 
Nessa13 replied...
Oct. 30, 2013 at 8:23 am :
***piece***
 
The_Typewriter replied...
Jan. 10 at 7:10 pm :
Thanks. I also appreciate the constructive critique, (that's why I submit things in the first place.) I was wondering, what sort of things do you think would be nice to add?
 
Nessa13 replied...
Jan. 14 at 12:57 pm :
I think that if you were to make it a little longer, add another verse or something, and fix some of the spelling mistakes in it, that it would be really good (:
 
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