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Please, please look at me

October 27, 2013
By The_Typewriter GOLD, Dumont, New Jersey
The_Typewriter GOLD, Dumont, New Jersey
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There I was, on the floor,
crossed legs, thinkin’ ‘bout you.
Your brown hair, your brown eyes,
and the way you’re never blue.
Sense of humor, perfect smile,
seem so out of reach to me.
Shy girl who you might
never ever truly meet.

Please, please, oh dear-dear, please look at me,
Why can’t I ever be person you want to see.
How come I can’t even start to talk?
You turn my tongue to chalk.

I don’t want to seem obsessive,
but you sneak into my memory.
I, want to stop, but I can’t.
It puts me in misery.
We’re out of touch,
But miss you so much.

Please, please, oh dear-dear, please look at me,
Why can’t I ever be person you want to see.
How come I can’t even start to talk?
I’m guarded behind a lock.



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Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2014 at 12:57 pm
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift

I think that if you were to make it a little longer, add another verse or something, and fix some of the spelling mistakes in it, that it would be really good (:

on Jan. 10 2014 at 7:10 pm
The_Typewriter GOLD, Dumont, New Jersey
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Thanks. I also appreciate the constructive critique, (that's why I submit things in the first place.) I was wondering, what sort of things do you think would be nice to add?

on Jan. 10 2014 at 7:09 pm
The_Typewriter GOLD, Dumont, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 12 comments
Lol, thanks.

C.Ronaldo_7 said...
on Oct. 30 2013 at 12:23 pm
C.Ronaldo_7, Las Vegas, Nevada
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It has swag   YOLO!!!!!!!!!!!

Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2013 at 8:23 am
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift

***piece***

Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2013 at 8:22 am
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift

This piecwe has a lot of potintial (: I feel like if you were to go back over it and add a few things, this song could be great <3 Its good tho (: 


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