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I told you that for you,
I would move the mountains.
I told you,
That I would tear down the skies.
I told you,
That you could move the seas.
That you could move the seas.

I'll move the mountains for you,
If you'll move the seas for me.
Together we are better,
I'm better next to you.

I'll move the mountains for you,
I'll move the mountains for you,
I'll move the mountains for you,
If you'll move the seas.

Together we are better,
Together we will,
Move the mountains and the seas.
We'll move the mountains and the seas,
We'll move the mountains and the seas,
We'll move the mountains and the seas,
Together.

Together we are better,
Together we are better,
Together we'll move the mountains and the seas.
The mountains and the seas.



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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 22, 2013 at 12:08 am:
Hello, my friend! I am not a songwriter so I probably shouldn't give tips on how to write one. I enjoy the concept and the title, but it seemed like it got repetitive. The first two stanzas(?), I don't know what they are called in songs, are good and I think they should be kept. I think they should actually be reversed so that the second one is actually the beginning of the song and I think that the one that starts 'I told you that for you' should be the chorus. Now, yo... (more »)
 
dragonsandthree replied...
Jun. 22, 2013 at 9:33 am :
Okay, thanks, Lexus!
 
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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 10:41 pm:
Not in love with it, but for your first poem it was pretty good :) just think its missing something.
 
dragonsandthree replied...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 10:42 pm :
Okay, thanks!
 
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