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A burning Tale

May 1, 2013
By Breathfree BRONZE, Jammu, Other
Breathfree BRONZE, Jammu, Other
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
luk in2 my eyez.... D soul iz burnin !!


The fainted leaves fall and die
as they lie on ground,
nature never show mercy over the weak,
or the one who bowed

I am no exception, I knew
i will be forgotten
but there are things i must do
to ease my suffering, to make it soften

I watched the sky and thousand stars
cursed me over my sin
the earth ready to burst and
to swallow me within

I step forward but the winds
are strong
they pushed me back exactly
where i moved from

I heard shuttering my bones,
felt the load on my chest
I am going deep below
this might ends my quest

With every last breath I had,
and the will i left few
I sat on my knees, moved my head
and watched the sight of you

The rage boiled my blood,
discontent fueled my lungs
my hands dying to touch you, my mouth
had a song to sung

kill me, if that you want
I mumbled in her ear
Death is the last thing you will get
she said it with no fear

She sedated me with her kiss
I fell asleep with all my mess
firs she peeled my skin,
then ripped off my flesh

The sweet memories she gave me,
and the castle began to fall
my hatred overpowered my soul,
my blood turned to tar

I woke up at sudden, my eyes
bit blurred
but i saw her enjoying,
her mouth was filled with blood

I held her to the throat,
i threw her back a mile
My body caught the fire
and i knew i would survive

The pain and suffering was gone,
the night held me tight
clouds swallowed the stars,
my fire grew more bright

I staked my burning hand,
melt down her heart
i am done here i said,
now let the gods play their part

I sat down near the river
of her blood, her eyes
staring me bleak
i looked deep in them,
couldnt recognise its me

the face I had lost, the man
here was gone
I found myself in the world
where i wasnt born

from there i started the journey
like a bird who forgot her nest
I turned every stone in my way
but never found again myself



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on Aug. 4 2013 at 8:29 am
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

Real nice meaning a few spelling errors but that's easy to fix I like how its has an errie tone to it overall great job I can see your strenght are songs    

on Aug. 2 2013 at 3:14 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
8 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

Has really good meaning, it's very good my only critique is that you gotta work on your subject-verb agreement rules. If you have questions on what that is just look it up, you'll find a bunch on it. If you still need help I'm always in poetry and will be glad to help Good job though (:

on May. 6 2013 at 10:56 am
Breathfree BRONZE, Jammu, Other
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
luk in2 my eyez.... D soul iz burnin !!

please feel free to write your veiws and thoughts. I'll be glad.