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Would She Hear Me?

Would she hear me if I called her name?
Would she hold me if she knew my shame?
Would she even love me if I was to blame?

As my tears fall and crash around me,
I feel the guilt wash out.
All of the shame, all of the hate.
It all just flows out, like there is no tomorrow.

Would she hear me if I called her name?
Would she hold me if she knew my shame?
Would she even love me if I was to blame?

This path I walk,
It's in the wrong direction.
Her voice calls out to me,
But why do I not go to her?

Would she hear me if I called her name?
Would she hold me if she knew my shame?
Would she even love me if I was to blame?

I want to listen, But I'm not able to.

This path I walk,
Allows none to speak.
It allows only the weak,
As brittle as chalk.

So why do I follow it,
This path of darkness?
No one person accepts me,
Except for Her.

This path I walk,
Allows none to speak.
It allows only the weak,
As brittle as chalk.

Why do I not listen?
She calls out to me, every day.
But I cannot follow it,
This path forbids me.

This path I walk,
Allows none to speak.
It allows only the weak,
As brittle as chalk.



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Life_lineThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sep. 8 at 10:45 pm:
I really liked it . It was catchy, it flowed, and it had a clean feel to it. you should keep making songs like this
 
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Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi said...
Sept. 27, 2013 at 12:53 am:
That's because I based it off of the song, just like in the "Author's Comments" section. :P And thanks lol.
 
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puppy295 said...
May 3, 2013 at 9:41 pm:
some of these lyrics are from the song Tears Don't Fall by Bullet For My Valentine. but I like how you used a few parts in your song. it's a great song btw! :)
 
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Lexi_Arnold said...
May 3, 2013 at 7:11 pm:
I love it!
 
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ieLLe said...
May 3, 2013 at 9:43 am:
this is so awesome :) nice
 
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