Would She Hear Me?

April 29, 2013
By Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"We have nothing to fear, but Fear itself." -F.D.R.


Would she hear me if I called her name?
Would she hold me if she knew my shame?
Would she even love me if I was to blame?

As my tears fall and crash around me,
I feel the guilt wash out.
All of the shame, all of the hate.
It all just flows out, like there is no tomorrow.

Would she hear me if I called her name?
Would she hold me if she knew my shame?
Would she even love me if I was to blame?

This path I walk,
It's in the wrong direction.
Her voice calls out to me,
But why do I not go to her?

Would she hear me if I called her name?
Would she hold me if she knew my shame?
Would she even love me if I was to blame?

I want to listen, But I'm not able to.

This path I walk,
Allows none to speak.
It allows only the weak,
As brittle as chalk.

So why do I follow it,
This path of darkness?
No one person accepts me,
Except for Her.

This path I walk,
Allows none to speak.
It allows only the weak,
As brittle as chalk.

Why do I not listen?
She calls out to me, every day.
But I cannot follow it,
This path forbids me.

This path I walk,
Allows none to speak.
It allows only the weak,
As brittle as chalk.


The author's comments:
I got my inspiration for this piece from the song "Tears Don't Fall."

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on Sep. 8 2014 at 10:45 pm
Life_line BRONZE, White Plains, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have"


























-Bob Marley

I really liked it . It was catchy, it flowed, and it had a clean feel to it. you should keep making songs like this

on Sep. 27 2013 at 12:53 am
Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"We have nothing to fear, but Fear itself." -F.D.R.

That's because I based it off of the song, just like in the "Author's Comments" section. :P And thanks lol.

puppy295 said...
on May. 3 2013 at 9:41 pm
puppy295, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Don't Tread On Me! and Mess With The Best, Die Like The Rest!

some of these lyrics are from the song Tears Don't Fall by Bullet For My Valentine. but I like how you used a few parts in your song. it's a great song btw! :)

Lexi_Arnold said...
on May. 3 2013 at 7:11 pm
Lexi_Arnold, Painsville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
People can only make you feel bad with your permission.

I love it!

ieLLe said...
on May. 3 2013 at 9:43 am
ieLLe, Olongapo City, Other
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this is so awesome :) nice


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