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Falls Apart

A pained souls to other,
In the eyes of others,
I fall to the ground the pains of the world,
the memories I losses of you,
a smile elapse me as scars scream the betrayal and pain I've felt for so long,
A single feather sheds a tear for the feelings I cant reveal,
The eyes of a soul that's seen the world as the savages see,
Oh fly fly away into the dreams that keep me at bay,
Try,try again but no one cares about me,
but as I move I keep Hurt,hurt,hurt those around me,
help me see each every day a soul has to die,
so carry me away to die another day,
Carry me away to cry another day,
carry me away to die another day,
A feather to help you remember, help you to say,
the words you could never,
But realize that I have died in the arms of another,
A coffin where my heart should be,
a stone with your name,
I try to move on but your stuck in my mind,
the way you smiled, the way you loved me,
clouds my mind I can't think who am I,
no one nothing not with out you so COME BACK TO ME!
Come back to me my beloved,
Come back to me I need you to help me steer my life,
Come back to me to scream the truth that I lose,
Come back to me to show the truth, instead of this heartbreak,
instead of this pain that never ends
no relief in the misery of this world,
help me fly to where you once began,
No one will help stop the pain to see the upside,
no one but you,
As I approach the cliff edge and fall,
My wings are golden as they prepare to return home,
The water is nothing but your face that en-cloud me with love,
My love I am back to you once again,
As I dive into the water the world washes away revealing another,
For once I am free, for once I am loved, forever



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Janelle7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 24 at 4:52 pm
I absolutely LOVE this poem! I can relate so much! Thanks for writing this...and stay strong and smile!
 
maelstrom14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 25, 2013 at 10:28 pm
i love your poetry keep writing and dont let anyone bring you down.
 
MeggieMills said...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 5:11 pm
So great ! LOVED IT! Itsemotional but great!
 
mnm08 said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 4:41 pm
Loved the symbolism and imagery that u used :) great job!! 
 
Sunny225LuvsHugsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 8:13 pm
Love it so much emotion to it!! 5 stars
 
Lonely_Despair said...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 3:40 pm
This poem; very deep and alive. Very, very heavy poem; you can feel urge of darkness wrap around you when you read it, but then you feel silver lining that's broken off in the distance when you get toward the end. Very beautiful poem.
 
FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 10:33 pm
yep im more to the poems this was the first poem that flow'd togetehr as a song with out critics to make it work so thank you nightrunner
 
nightrunner23 said...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 10:23 pm
I'm not really good at song lyrics, but I can see this working in a song, it's good, I guess this would be your strength area.
 
SecretFlame said...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 4:35 pm
Loved it! This poem has a great rhythm, energy, and imagery. You really have to pay attention to understand it, and it keeps you hanging on to the very end. You have a great mastery of the rhythm of song lyrics.
 
HopethroughFaith said...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 5:32 pm
Also very very good (imagine me talking like im from mexico)
 
HannahBanana99This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 5:30 pm
Aw BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING! It all flowed smoothly and perfectly. Great job and keep writing :)
 
WhiteSwan13 said...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 5:25 pm
AMAZING!!!!!!!
 
royalujjwa4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 25, 2013 at 6:55 am
beautiful!!
 
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