Darkness

March 2, 2013
By Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"


To touch a soul and bring in me the pain,
The misery to watch and try to call out,
The webs of the darkness encircle me snapping and lashing out for blood,
Thier murderous eyes gleaming for fun,
As I try to reach where I once started,
But how can you go back from a place that seems far away,
Unwind the veil your set in your eyes,
Set your heart free with the melody of my love,
Fly away into the cave of your thoughts.
Oh open the veil into yesterday and unleash the monster hiding at bay,
Open your eyes and open your heart and bring back the light thats been shut away.
Or shut yourself away once again.


The author's comments:
This is what happens when i listen to music and think of life you get sweet sad song lyrics hope you like them

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on May. 3 2015 at 2:41 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

Wonderful job!

on Apr. 18 2013 at 5:29 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

Once again you have amazed me.  This is perfect and my favorite line is, "Oh open the veil into yesterday."

on Apr. 1 2013 at 4:07 pm
AmorMoritur PLATINUM, Monroe, North Carolina
25 articles 38 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is only you and your camera. The limitations in your photography are in yourself, for what we see is what we are." ~Ernst Haas

this is REALLY good...amazing meaning

ShyRhea SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2013 at 7:54 pm
ShyRhea SILVER, Cordell, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I'm too imaginative for my own good."

Really cool I love it

on Mar. 30 2013 at 7:52 pm
HopethroughFaithInGod BRONZE, Perry, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction" - Issac Newton (i think?)

hey i made a skype.... add me dmanhope

on Mar. 29 2013 at 8:31 pm
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont let people drive u crazy if you know its in walking distance

it seems like your thoughts are shrouded and you can relay them freely. like i said before you word choice is excellent, but the overall is like a 6.9 out of ten. if you just tweaked you work, and spent just a little more time, you will get published, no doubt. I suggest read more poetry and find the way some of your fav poems and poets flow to help develop a natural un-clouded style

on Mar. 29 2013 at 4:41 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

*soul               

on Mar. 29 2013 at 4:40 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

I love all of your poems/song lyrics and you always end them exceptionally well, tying together the whole piece. This a beautiful haunting piece that touches the heart and sould

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Mar. 28 2013 at 5:32 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Absolutley Beautiful!! Nothing to change! :P

on Mar. 28 2013 at 5:31 pm
HopethroughFaithInGod BRONZE, Perry, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction" - Issac Newton (i think?)

It is very good! YES

on Mar. 28 2013 at 5:24 pm
WhiteSwan13 SILVER, Hawera, Other
8 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing is Impossible & We Live and Learn

I LOVE IT!!!! :)

on Mar. 25 2013 at 8:31 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

I think its perfect, i specially loved "open the veil into yesterday", awesome work!

on Mar. 23 2013 at 9:43 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

Thanks guys, do you think there's anything i should change to make it better?

on Mar. 23 2013 at 9:41 pm
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

that was beautiful!

on Mar. 19 2013 at 6:14 pm
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
13 articles 1 photo 303 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.

You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Beautiful, I love it! 


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